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littlebear81
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since 2002-08-03

Posts 3
Wisconsin

0 posted 2002-08-24 10:22 AM

This past week has been the hardest of my life
Pain and confusion I had never experienced
The tears, the frowns, the silence
Unfortunately, you weren't here when it all happened
You were away and had no idea
But that is a good thing to me in one way
It made me figure out that no matter how much I can't stand you at times, there is double the love
Your love is amazing
I thank you for being there in my past weak moments
I wish you could of been here
I can't wait to see your smile again
I need to see you, know you are okay
Because I can't imagine my life without you

I wrote this a couple days ago after someone I knew comitted suicde. It's been a really hard year, more than one person I know has died and I'm really sad.

Rebecca

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-08-24 10:25 AM

littlebear81
A sad write but well done.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2002-08-24 10:28 AM

I am so sorry, Rebecca. Perhaps remembering the things you loved about the person will help carry you through the sad times. Hearthugs to you, and welcome to your new extended family.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2002-08-24 10:31 AM

littlebear81 - my prayers go out to you on your loss. Best to you...

BC

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2002-08-24 10:45 AM

We're sorry to hear that you have come to write of such tragedy. I personally hope you stay awhile and learn to smile again. Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

TriXter
Member

since 2002-03-20

Posts 112
The One

5 posted 2002-08-24 10:59 AM

well, welcome to passions on a sad note i guess, The poem was strong with feeling raw emotion from the heart, kind of reminds me of my writes

I hope to read more of youre poems

The man of few words...

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

6 posted 2002-08-24 11:06 AM

So sorry to hear of your loss.

May you find comfort in the words of others as we embrace you in this time of sadness.

Electra

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2002-08-24 11:16 AM

Take heart little one...All of life has it's own rhythm...even in the endings.
Birth to brighter days ahead. ThisDiamond

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-08-24 12:21 PM

(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Rebecca, this is so heartbreaking but wonderfully written, sweet friend, all our hearts go out to you as we all have had losses of our own and together we will share each others tears and thoughts and smiles! (BIG HUGGGSSSSS) This is a powerful debut, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Rebecca, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

littlebear81
New Member

since 2002-08-03

Posts 3
Wisconsin

9 posted 2002-08-24 02:23 PM

Wow! Thanks for responding. I am so glad you like it! This is a big acomplishment for me because I am only 12. And I am moving on, slowing, but steadily.

Rebecca

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2002-08-24 03:32 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS REBECCA!!

For being only twelve you have shown
much wisdom in your first post.
I know this must be a difficult time for you..
but coming here to Passions you will be able to let those sad feelings go
through your writing..
and hopefully see happier times
and meet some new friends here along the way.
Keep up the good work!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2002-08-24 03:40 PM

Hi Rebecca. Good to meet you. I know the sadness you feel. You are in good company here. Welcome.

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