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Isolation Blue/ accompanied by music/just click
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Isolation Blue/ accompanied by music/just click |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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http://www.eunan.net/aud/isolationblue.mp3 light rock catagory. Isolation Blue In a distant world of darkness far from the home town girl in the midst of foreign oceans there's a lonely soldier's world where the pen of love stops talking when a promise turns untrue and far away there's isolation blue Chorus: Memoirs of pages filled with passion tear stained letters in pockets full of truth dreams inked on promise after action a river of words in isolation blue There's night skies lacking moonlight when a lover loses face and a soldier can get buried in the dirt inside his veins and the chapters of defeat are written with ancient rules and far away there's isolation blue. There's a lover's fire an old desire a distant fading flame where wayward winds keep blowing cross an icy memory lane and the brightest leaves of Autumn become colors of the truth and far away there's isolation blue. Memoirs of pages filled with passion tear stained letters in pockets full of truth dreams inked on promise after action a river of words in isolation blue. The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to re-language historie [This message has been edited by ethome (08-20-2002 11:04 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Be assured I will be back this evening to capture the essence of this, again... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) Oh my gosh, I am speechless, I clicked on the MP3 to start it then I sung along, this brought me to tears as it is so sad but soooooo beautiful! (sigh) You are a very talented artist, sweet friend, I believe this is worthy of hitting the Billboard Hot 100, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ethome - all I can say is 'what a write, and what a great song'... BC |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I have a strong background in the music business as a "wife" email coming to you for a laugh. I have to tell you this is an incredible song, and I know a good one when I hear it trust me on this one. As a poem, the words stuck me hard, and the ones that stabbed the most were these... and a soldier can get buried in the dirt inside his veins I heard that from someone once that they felt that sand and dirt now ran through them instead of blood, so I am sending him your song. Also, I am sending it out to everyone here that is on my mailing list out of sheer pride that we have in Passions someone as talented as yourself. Thank you for sharing this with us. The most valuable thing you own is a smile, wear it, and share it. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 FANTASTIC!! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
 Oh WOW oh WOW oh WOW ... Eric .... I loved this!  I loved the guitar, I loved the beat, I loved the melody, I loved the words, I loved the voice ... OK ... so have I said I loved this???!!!  This is just wonderful, and I am sooooooo glad you posted the MP3 file so we could have a listen. It's one thing to read your work, and make up a melody in my head, as I often seem to do, lol ... but this just blew me away to be able to hear you for real. Very, very well done. Easy listening ... oh, I just loved it (did I say that already? lol)  Best wishes and big hugs, /Kit |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is wonderful, the lyrics, music and singing. I hope this is on the radio someday, if not already. You have much talent. Sandra |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love it, Eric! But I do have one small suggestion. When listening to the phrase: "Memoirs of pages filled with passion" I found it a bit awkward, and in my mind, I felt it would sound better as 'memory pages' or 'remembered pages.' But perhaps that's just me. Overall, I think it is outstanding, and will send the link to a friend.  from Kacy |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
just awesome ethome!! I am sending this out to everyone I know. GREAT JOB. somebody tell me, please help me.... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eric I'm in awe of your talent, my friend! Thank you for the music. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Memoirs of pages filled with passion tear stained letters in pockets full of truth dreams inked on promise after action a river of words in isolation blue There's night skies lacking moonlight when a lover loses face and a soldier can get buried in the dirt inside his veins and the chapters of defeat are written with ancient rules and far away there's isolation blue. There's a lover's fire an old desire a distant fading flame where wayward winds keep blowing cross an icy memory lane and the brightest leaves of Autumn become colors of the truth and far away there's isolation blue. =================================== THIS IS SOOOOO COOL!!!! I am soooo proud of you and so happy for you...and how very cool this must be for you...I hope YOU are proud of you...what a great feeling this must be to hear your lyrics turned into such a lovely, bittersweet bluesy tune.... Few ever get to make it this far... So tell us more about this...like when can we buy it Look out Van...E-babes is on the loose  If all the tear drops went to heaven |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You've got a world of talent, Eric. These are some of the finest lyrics I've seen in any song...you deserve a great deal of praise for this one. You certainly have mine. Hats off to you, sir  |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is excellent writing... and the music accompanied is terrific... I have already listened to the song about 5 times... Thank you for sharing... Regards to you ET~ Sudhir |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...and its distribution date is? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ Exquisite ! Such wonderful musical accompaniment~ Greatly enjoyed~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
BRAVO! APPLAUDING YOUR TALENTS AS POET AND WRITER OF SOMG LYRICS! NORT EASY, YOU JUST MAKE IT LOOK THAT WAY; IN AWE LIZ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I've been quite busy at work so I'll just say a thank you to all for the moment but I will be back to thank everyone individually.....I appreciate your comments very much!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ok, ok, I was finally able to take the time to download it and listen and I am sitting here in total awe... and I knew you when you were just a poet! LOL... oh Ethome, this is wonderful! Thank you so much for sharing yourself and your talents with us! |
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cherrypoptart Member
since 2002-06-09
Posts 109state of wordthiness |
Wanted me to bop this one too.......he he old guys need daughters to look after them..........oh woe is me! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
 I was thinking...(I do that sometimes) it would sure be nice to post this one on the main site so outsiders could enjoy it in case they get lost on thier way in here. Great song, just a great song! The most valuable thing you own is a smile, wear it, and share it. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
hey you...I need to thank you big time! I've been begging for this---and my apologies for waiting so long to comment-- I do love this--and? e me? I want DETAILS!!! THE LYRICS....always exceptional lovie, and the music? TWICE AS NICE. (please tell me what y'did?) and I know, I know, I'm never satisfied...grin...  and THANK YOU. |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Yes, the words are fantastic. I can't wait to hear the music. Still trying to get through. smile |
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cherrypoptart Member
since 2002-06-09
Posts 109state of wordthiness |
The server went down for the old music link so I'm bumping the new usable link up for you know who! http://www.jmnmusic.com/aud/isolationblue.mp3 |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Eric this is truly amazing. I sent the link on to my kids and my youngest is already screaming to know where he can buy the CD!!!! Fabulous, just fabulous. Hugs, Marti  |
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