Open Poetry #22 |
The Lost Sonnets - The Meaning of Eternity |
Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
Baby I know forever's more than just worth a try, I think it's meant for you and I, It's in our palms if it's in our hearts, And it's up to us to never part. Baby just look me in the eye once more, And tell me i'm the one you adore, And my world will crumble at your feet, That's just how much you mean to me. Just breathe upon my wanting ear, That kiss in the wind I need to hear, In a whisper so sincere and true, Those magical words I love you. Then you will see the world as I, We are and will be till the end of time, Take my hand, trust your heart in me, And you'll see in a moment what eternity means. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Simply lovely. I enjoyed it very much. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gabriel, Enjoyed the read, but it's not my eternity. LOL |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Gabriel - romance, you write it well... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Gabriel, this is sooooooo beautiful, I love it! (big hugggssssss) You always write romance so well, sweet friend, may you always find these sonnets to share with your love till eternity, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiufl heart, sweet Gabriel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Gabriel, very beautiful and smooth writing. Wonderful.. If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
Thank you all for your comments! |
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