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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“BEING WITH YOU” by Bill Charles ~~~~ I would walk with you to heaven, I would walk with you to hell… I would walk closer and hold you, I would walk to where you dwell… You could teach me love in heaven, You could teach me love in hell… You could teach me to stay by your side, You could teach me to not leave and hide… We once were always to stay together, We once were always to never part… Now you’re gone yet you still conquered, Now you’re gone with this fragile heart… ~~~~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
that certainly is a 'hook, line, and sinker' falling caveat...no one who loves you back would lead you to hell, though Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
Great write, i know the feeling of being left with only the big hole in your chest where your heart used to be. |
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Moonlight Romeo 
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Spoken like a true Romantic. You know the song very well. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is very sad Bill. Nicely written in all it sadness. A very touching piece. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love your songs Bill... You are such a romantic...oh yes. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
HUgssssss MR Romance.....love how ya sing those blues...  Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Bill, this is sooooo beautifully sad, sweet friend, I can't believe I missed this earlier, I'm so happy I found this sensitive compassionate ode! (sigh) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
WOW !!! What love !! Be thankful for it. I enjoyed this very much. Kitty * That which gives light, must endure burning * [This message has been edited by Kitty** (08-23-2002 11:38 PM).] |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
What a very strong Love?? I really like the way you wrote it..Great thought?? Good luck Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Our heart are always so fragile when it comes to love. I liked the last line especially, sad but lovely Liz |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awww Bill, your heart is on your sleeve in this one. Very nice. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The author deserves applause... Always to attain the highest blessings of love. This Diamond |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This would make a good blues song....for you sing it well... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ah, BC...the heart never truly leaves, it just takes a well needed break sometimes to prepare for bigger and better things to come  Hugs ~ Ruth |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Bill those of us who wear our hearts upon our sleeves often take the biggest falls.....but ya know.....when we finally get back up..... we fly..... Hugs to you poet friend. If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Lovely! |
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