Open Poetry #22 |
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pendulum |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium ![]() |
the inability to speak in lesser number of words the growing imbalance between sugar and salt fire and ice true and false light and dark heads and tails right and left short and tall and the futility of it all there is no true justice there is no true truth things are what we are made to b e l i e v e put your money into funds for relief and they shall spend it all on the NEEDY that are themselves every day hurts a little more than yesterday and I think Love is a drug that helps you forget the pain and maybe, just maybe, that’s why people crave -- for Love gives attention fulfils ego, pride forgives flaws uplifts the hearts of the real NEEDY and it even satisfies the body yes, I need some share of love is there a world bank or IMF for love? how can I register? I am a pendulum swinging between the oldest and the youngest the strongest and the weakest 28 year old in this world! and I am hanging by an ever s t r e t c h i n g t h r e a d ! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sudhir, your wisdom is ageless... and it is so good to see you writing again! You write like a sage and this one pleased me very much! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I too, think love is a drug...I am trying not to be addicted because when the love isn't there it is so hard to recover from the "drying out" time hugs M.. *I would have thought you a bit older for being so wise)..I read that age question in discussions and was surprised ![]() |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks a million my dear friends... for being there when the pendulum swings... ![]() Regards, Sudhir |
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Zall Member
since 2002-08-25
Posts 214London, England |
feel that way too man Zall |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah..indeed the wisdom is there in these words... very nicely done my friend..good to read you again. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I started highlighting. Wanted to save this and that, wanted to comment on this and that. I highlighted the whole poem. This feeling you have, I have it too. As do many I think. In a world where love is claimed on a street corner, still there are so many longing. A great write. And a keeper for me! The White Rose~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks a lot my friends.... your coming by and leavng behind spots of kindness is much appreciated... Regards, Sudhir |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is excellent m'friend... good to read you again. "Love is a drug" I too agree. Mareew ![]() |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
O, the woeful duality of existence... This is gorgeous. O' to be delivered from the realm of the rational into pure song... |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
It's somehow comforting to know there are others who are NEEDY, that I am not alone out here. |
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A. L. Becker Member
since 2002-09-06
Posts 167San Francisco, California |
Sudhir, once again your words have touched me. i listened to: "...Love gives attention fulfils ego, pride forgives flaws uplifts the hearts of the real NEEDY and it even satisfies the body" and i thought: maybe that's not real love. i nodded with agreement during the 2nd stanza. and the cynicysm of "the NEEDY" is very much like the cynicism of those who sell love as merely a means to satisfaction. if we expect a benefit from love (as we might from a drug) perhaps we need to rediscover what love really is, and can be. Annie :- |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you very much, my dear friends for coming by and leaving behind your footprints of kindness... regards, sudhir |
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