Open Poetry #22 |
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Sunburned Artistry |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise ![]() |
![]() Summer glow inside Outside a painting is born A sunburn canvas Sun God brushes me scarlet Bikini lines highlighted Poetry is: |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Aloha, Island lady! I enjoyed this kiss of sunshine poem. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Oh Cheryl, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, aloha, all the colors made me feel I was soaking up the sun, I would love a mango smoothie about now! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Moonlight Romeo![]() ![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Those (and these) are my favorite kinds of lines. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Cheryl...this is TANFASTIC!! Loved it! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
CSKpoet - yes, right from the islands... BC |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Isn't that the truth? |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Cheryl, bright, sunny, and deLIGHTful. Well done gal! If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetKoKo~ Delightful ... as always~ You bring such a poetic glow to the forums~ Be happy ! ![]() *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Midnightsun: aloha and thanks for the sweet greeting and kind comments on this haiku.I am glad it brought some enjoyment to you ![]() Noah: Here you are again, you Mr Smile person ![]() Moonlight Romeo: I am glad this was enjoyed and thanks for the kind words....aloha Enchantress: you are as kind and wonderful as ever..Tan comes after the burn...Owie till then thanks for the read and comments hugs to you too... Bill: well it is a concept from the beach, but I remember the sunburns that California gave me before Hawaii...ahhhh life is tough I guess..LOL thanks for the kind words and the read... Sunshine:yep and all because the sunshine shines.. thanks for the read and comment. Gentle spirit: your comment made my day shine so thank you very much. Marge: smiles atcha GF! I am glad to see you in my corner again..makes me smile and encouraged to try to get my pen going again.. much love and hugs.. ![]() and a big aloha to all ![]() ![]() |
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