Open Poetry #22 |
Does It Matter? |
angeliceyes48198 Junior Member
since 2002-05-28
Posts 16Michigan,USA |
It doesn't matter that I gave you my soul, loving you as I had never loved before. It doesn't matter I risked losing my world as I knew it...I thought you were worth the risk. Convincing me to give into you-I was never a treasure to you, only an item of convenience. Deceiving me only for your pleasure...I should have known better...Someone as special as you can only be found in dreams. My love for you is genuine, I gave it my all...You never really gave "us" a chance. It doesn't matter how much my heart aches for you... I will wait an eternity loving you forever. Did you ever care? |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
To answer your question - probably not to him... but you do matter to others. Hold on to that. *S* And keep writing... *S* This brought forth so many thoughts I almost wrote you a book-length response, but decided instead to tell you to email me if you'd like to talk. *S* [This message has been edited by suthern (08-22-2002 09:33 AM).] |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I know exactly how this feels. They tend to take advantage of us. Then just toss us aside. Hon, it is there loss, not ours. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Ah, me, how sad when we see. Well-written plaintive piece. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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