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A Bird Boat or Plane?
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A Bird Boat or Plane? |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Guess what those flying objects are birds, boats or planes whisk past stars to come up with all alien sorts while crossbone ghost ships visit ports galleons normally float in the water? patched-eye crews sail seas that are hotter? follow some kind of navigational direction some still sail, they say minus human detection the empty cabins with their charges degraded fine fabrics of the yard, tinted shades faded. Given wings, the vessel would fly boat and rudder to sail the skies guess the object as it coasts near sullen sailor wastes, do you fear? Savvy sailors avoid fogs and torrents the eagle soars on uplifted currents binocular visions recall alien sorts jewelled snuff boxes invite regal snorts crossbone banners leave abandoned ports hail New World..golden sands..rich resorts. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The navigational pull of the nautical float... Well done, Sir! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
playful images, great imagination Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
NO.....It's Superman!, (Mighty Mouse?)....good write...interesting |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ecrivan Rich palette for an abstract, enjoyed |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Toerag, perhaps superman carrying a flying boat!Thanks for sharing Karilea, in an imaginative mood  Sy,Vas A 'Monty Python' type of poem, I guess  [This message has been edited by ecrivan (08-22-2002 11:46 AM).] |
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