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If I Could Kiss You
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If I Could Kiss You |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(I haven't had my first kiss yet, and dream of it so very much to share with my Joanna, it must be the most magical feeling in all the world. This is another beautiful lovesick fantasy I had!  ) If I Could Kiss You By: Noah Eaton 8/14/02 If I could share my first kiss with you That would be my lifes most wonderful dream Watching your sweet green eyes reflect my blue Shutting them gently feeling your tongue touch mine softly Gently in the summer breeze I would carry you Continuing to brush your lips with rosepetals Crying in bliss together that we finally kissed Yet so scared to lose each other, promising an eternity so special I gently lay you on fields of wisteria, gladiluses, and magnolias My arms around you, hands on you, feeling your lips Time is melting, breaking like a cloud of cicadas, waterfalls dripping like tapioca Moaning softly like a Santa Ana wind, blazing cranberry fire from your kiss My heart leaps happily like a border collie winning a sheepdog show You occupy the sedilla of my wonderland, swivel-hipping sunshine to me You're wearing the silk of an angel, dyed in rosewood oil A Lily of France, gently kissing my entire heart lovingly If I could share my first kiss with you That would be my most wonderful happy dream You are my Terpischore in blue jeans and angel wings That I want to shower in kisses lovingly Drowning your heart in ecstasy.. "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (08-14-2002 06:58 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 Excellent write my sidekick!Don't rush it sweetie...there's plenty of time. ~Hugs too!~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - I agree with Nancy. Don't rush it, there's plenty of time. But of course if you can't wait, de plane, de plane!!!! Lovely poem Noah... BC |
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Singing Sparrow Member
since 2002-05-12
Posts 94 |
aw, too sweet to be down here so far! ***bump***  SS |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Awwwwwwwww, if I could I would scoop you up in my loving arms and shower you with kisses! I love you sweetie pie!Joanna [This message has been edited by RosePetal (08-17-2002 01:57 PM).] |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Awww how sweet! I'm jealous of you two. I wish you both the best!  God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
To see this through your words, was simply the sweetest Noah ... brings back memories for this old girl. Take your time, and cherish each other ... Best wishes to you and to Joanna, /Kit |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh Noah can't you and Joanna meet half way? Gosh, I would love to see you two get together and soon. Hugs, Marti |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Noah Your words of love and longing are always so very beautiful and I really hope you find what you are looking for. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Noah, your star crossed romance must be painful for you but it makes for great poetry. *Kiss on the cheek* to keep you going until you can fill up.  Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Noah, you are just the sweetest and honest young man. This is a touching poem for those of us lucky enough to recall our first kiss. hugs to you, Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Oh Noah... I know what your dreams are... I have had that dream too... and I have to tell you... the first kiss... is the one I will always remember... smile... Neeraja |
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