Open Poetry #22 |
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Your Stare |
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haydenjames Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 164Antigua & Barbuda ![]() |
![]() Face pale yet crimson, your coy well veiled by hazel eyes floating upwards within cherubs of pearly whites. Below them arch gently a vaguely pointed nose on which your two tiniest fingers lie, the others settled neatly above your brow. This peep-between has my awe awakened by your wine-colored lips, which airs slightly open an eternally sweet breath. Your charismatic flirt curls my attention, as do your lashes lead me to these constant eyes; to which I fall victim of your stare. My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org [This message has been edited by haydenjames (08-17-2002 03:27 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you Hayden, for the peek... |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Hayden, you have fit your poetry to the pic quite well....the power of a stare.... certainly something difficult to overcome.. Particularly an alluring or captivating one as you seem to have captured here... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
captivating write! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
I love this poem... and I love the presentation!!! Neeraja |
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