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. . . slowly loving . . . |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
my love never dies neither is my love scalar my love meanders very slowly with purpose traversing her damp body Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yours is a very tender love, then... and this emotes a shiver in response... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
my love meanders very slowly with purpose yeppers.......thats it. slowly, with purpose. Well done Interloper. Good to see you among us again. somebody tell me, please help me.... |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
as if...fla wasn't hot enough today...then...this...my, my, my...helen |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Very good write intercourser, um, er, I mean interloper.... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sunshine ~ Shivers are good ... shudders are better  Gentle Spirit ~ Thanks for the kind comment. I got to take a small break today Helen ~ then you should be very well aquainted with dampness Toerag ~ I'm not use to an intellectual response from you ... and you did not disappoint Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oooooh Myyyyy Yeeeeees!! Nobody does it better....nobody!  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay!!! Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you truly are the master of tankas and senryus as you are talented always, this is beautiful, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Interloper, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
That wasn't very nice to say, making fun I've my speech problem and such....but yanno, I remember when I was in high school and taking art and every one told me I should drop art and "enter-chorus"....I didn't really know what they meant till later in life and wasted all that time singing Stout Hearted Men to old ladies and parents?......(I'll bet you really feel badly now that ya said that mean remark to me don't ya?)...LOL |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ I love your meander~ LOL @ Toe .... LOL~ And an even bigger LOL at your response ! And then Toe's comeback ... and ....................... ? This is priceless .... thanks guys ~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Such a tender poem... such ROFLMAO responses! LOL I would be glad I'd stopped in for a read even if I'd been left a little hot and bothered... *G* But the 'Loper and Toe show is a laughter treat for my afternoon... Thanks, guys! *S* |
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Essorant Member Elite
since 2002-08-10
Posts 4769Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada |
Lol, enjoyed your words intereloper. Nicely done again. Essorant |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ooooh now this is sensual and moving. I enjoyed this to-day. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bob darling heart this is exquisite writing, and the thoughts simply flow down the page here. YOU have to know I utterly utterly utterly love this. The tall Texan has written an absolute winner. I don’t just have chills I think I have a temperature ………… brilliant this is one of your best darling heart. And I could spend the day’s delight Awaiting the coming of your night Spin colours into rainbows band Then lay them gently in your hand While your words paint the world anew With colours in fantastic hue And then my bands of rainbow light Would add their glow to the night Each day you gift these pages blue With words that are uniquely you You paint the sky and sketch the day While your words dance in wordy play So let me sit and drink you in And muse upon your words within I love it I utterly utterly love it As always Mushy   Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Nancy Lee ~ Golly woppers! Noah ~ Thank you my friend Toe ~ I heard you always sang "I'm just a lonely boy." Now I know why Marge ~ Thanks for your giggles Suthern ~ We aim to please. Although Toe's aim ain't none too good frum whut Balladeers sez Essorant ~ I think your first visit to my work. Thanks for the fine comment Chris ~ Thank you 1derful lady! Magnificent One ~ I hope you post that piece ... I love it! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Lonely "boy"?...You better come feel this thing again! LOL [This message has been edited by Toerag (08-22-2002 05:38 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper Ennjoyed your write and enjoyed the comments I enjoyed everything. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautifully slow |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ Come to me, poet My love also meanders Excursions desire The all of you - ecstacy All of me - promise fulfilled~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes indeed...who says faster is better.... very tender write my friend.. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Okay, I'm sold! I'll see you at 10! ~ s-m-i-l-e-s ~ Earthy Angel |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Toe ~ In your dreams Sy~ Thank you my friend. passing shadows ~ I think your first time to visit. Thank you for the read and nice comment Marge ~ And get killed by Bill? Not on your tintype Ron ~ Your approbation is very much appreciated in these part, pardner Earth Angel ~ Is that Pacific, Mountain, Central, or Eastern time Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bob darling heart ahhhhh someone else bumping my favourite of yours. And as for posting my scribble don’t be daft love, you are as bad as Margie girl, ‘tis just a poetic reply nothing more. The real writer is you. I already told you I love this but I don’t mind repeating myself, I love it utterly utterly Drop silent thoughts into my mind And take me to that place of find Where release and discovery Are waiting there to entice me Where dreams are held in smiling eyes A place where truth wears no disguise Please take me to that place divine Where time is held in a poet’s rhyme In dreaming thought and silent sigh Fly me to the place of Oh my Come into the deeps of my soul Where truth is my heart’s only goal Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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smitty-j Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 72Florida, USA |
I had to take a look at your work when you posted in mine...and thank you very much by the way. Now I hafta tell ya...phew...hot stuff...luvit luvit luvit (^_~) I'll definitely keep my eyes open for you. Julie |
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Magician Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 126 |
You are definitely the swoon master. Another great piece written by you. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Marsha ~ You have melted me and, now, all you can see is a little puddle with a stetson lying in the middle Julie ~ Well, thank you li'l lady Magician ~ Thank you for the magical comment Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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BrightStar Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 219 |
{sigh} Admiring you at Passions. |
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