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The wind (pour ma Etoile)
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The wind (pour ma Etoile) |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn 
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I am the wind that blows Through your windows And rustles the curtains I am the wind that sings Softly to you, as I sway Through the tree tops I am the gust that swirls all About you, tapping your Shoulder, tugging your dress I am the gale that howls In aloneness, shaking my fist For the wanting of you I am the breeze that kisses Your cheek and brushes The hair from your face I am the wind, a creature Of force, yet I have little Substance You must breathe me Deeply ~wranx In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
wranx - 'you must breath me deeply', yes. Like these words very much and the poem... BC |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I am the Queen of  s, and thisSir, is one of those... Karilea |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
You'd better do what Sunshine says. Loved this, wranx. *sliding through the leaves* |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Well, Thanks to you, Bill, for the reading of this. No, Karilea, I'll not throw this one back. squirrel dude, I am always happy to see a comment from you, means much...really. ~Ed |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
Gotta have this one!! VERY GOOD!!! ENJOYED!! Kitty * That which gives light, must endure burning * |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
on the short list. man! of little substance? this breeze refutes that, hitting like the view from a mountain brian I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
wranx....thank you so much...I love it and I'm happy so you posted it. So Beautiful.... Je t'adore sometimes the fairy tale becomes real and we find soft kisses linger far beyond the dream until tonight... ti amo DeaDiAmore  |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Etoile, "sometimes the fairy tale becomes real and we find soft kisses linger far beyond the dream" Glad you liked it! ti amo, ~me |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Etoile, "sometimes the fairy tale becomes real and we find soft kisses linger far beyond the dream" Glad you liked it! ti amo, ~me |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
[This message has been edited by wranx (08-22-2002 11:00 PM).] |
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misery_made_beautiful Junior Member
since 2002-08-10
Posts 36 |
Wranx, Really liked this one. The way the different types of wind symbolizes different types of you. And then the one line at the end that makes it all come together and surfaces it's deeper meaning. Cool-Beans-Dude! "Aging keeps life interesting" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Wranx, this is soooooo beautiful, I love it, and may her wind always have you floating in joy and comfort your soul! (sigh) This is beautifully whimsical, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Wranx, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wranx Beautiful! |
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