In happy beams through silver clouds

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Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

0 posted 2002-08-21 08:55 AM

With the magic of the night sky
Swim reflected lights of sun beams,
In that bed of celestial heights
There in sleeps a beautiful dream,
Where muses write of beloved ones
While young lovers rejoice in mirth
And from endless depth of passion,
A newborn smile has taken birth.

Hope hangs gladly from the full moon
In happy beams through silver clouds,
With silent pledge of a high noon
To filter life’s sinister shrouds.

All the fairies are waving hands
In trimmings of bright twinkling seams,
As stars design their wristy bands
There in sleeps a beautiful dream,
Where slow rhythm of love is played
While freedom is honoured by trust
And from honest colours of clay,
The green monster is brought to dust.

Hope glows today from the full moon
In happy beams through silver clouds,
With silent pledge of a high noon
To filter life’s sinister shrouds.

There’s always someone there to love
In the stretch of the winding stream,
All it takes is the strength to flow
Through the heart of a lovely dream,
Where songs breathe in effortless rhymes
While flowers bloom in nature’s bed
And from sparkling rays of white,
The shape of adore’s drawn in red.

Life spreads today from the full moon
In happy beams through silver clouds,
(The eyes will fall out of sleep soon
To look for faces in the crowd.)

I am trying rhyming after a long time... feels different after all these months of free verse... hopefully I did not waste your time

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-08-21 08:59 AM

Sudhir,
This is a wonderful write. A beautiful painting my friend.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-08-21 09:09 AM

You most certainly painted a beautiful picture
of the moon here here Sudhir.
Wonderful rhyme...well done!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Blue Kitty
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since 2002-08-05

Posts 72
Virginia

3 posted 2002-08-21 09:12 AM

this isn't a waste of time, it is beautiful, the rhyming is really good and I prefer that style cause it's a poem and poems are suppose to rhyme.

P.

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2002-08-21 09:42 AM

twas not a waste at all. What an enjoyable and beautiful write. Well done Sudhir.

somebody tell me, please help me....
understand.......(as sung by Trace Adkins)

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

5 posted 2002-08-21 10:11 AM

And from endless depth of passion,
A newborn smile has taken birth.

Hope hangs gladly from the full moon
In happy beams through silver clouds,

smiling with this...

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2002-08-21 11:22 AM

SudhirMyFriend~
Oh my ! Such a lovely, lovely gifting from you this morning~
This just fills my heart with happy thoughts~
Thanks ... I needed that~

'There’s always someone there to love
In the stretch of the winding stream,
All it takes is the strength to flow
Through the heart of a lovely dream,
Where songs breathe in effortless rhymes
While flowers bloom in nature’s bed
And from sparkling rays of white,
The shape of adore’s drawn in red.'

And this ... this, my friend, is totally beautiful !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

7 posted 2002-08-21 11:26 AM

Hope glows today from the full moon
In happy beams through silver clouds,
With silent pledge of a high noon
To filter life’s sinister shrouds.

Oh, I love this poem. It is going into my library. Well done. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

8 posted 2002-08-23 05:36 AM

Thank you all so very much...

Regards,
sudhir

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

9 posted 2002-08-24 04:59 AM

Sudhir-
Another truly beautiful write from you.
Very much enjoyed this one.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2002-08-25 02:02 AM

Like this Sudhir...James

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

11 posted 2002-09-03 07:35 AM

Thanks a lot Vicky and James...

Your kindness is much appreciated...

Regards,
Sudhir

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

12 posted 2002-09-24 03:08 PM

PoetFriendSudhir, I am soooooooooo taken by this splendid write and I compliment you on the 'rhyme'...
Thank you so very much for posting it...
Smiles2u
*~coco~*

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

13 posted 2002-09-26 12:14 PM

Coco~ thank YOU very much, my friend...

regards,
sudhir

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