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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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there is no fire that burns on the southside and no shine on the east the west is just as dark and the north feels so far away and the centre holds no desire and I walk and I walk first stumbling, then getting up back on my feet, biped again though bleeding with gashes as if seeking deliverance from blocked veins and locked truths of fierce sharpness of emptiness and Dido croons from yesterday’s memory radio “thank you”, she sang “for giving me the best day of my life” reality brings me back to the open wounds and harsh reminders of recent burglary when dressed as the loot went my other beloved leaving behind my collection of compact discs and old tapes where shall I play them I wonder rather emptily bringing me back again to seek the way for my next steps in this directionless world the insurance might cover some of the expenses hopefully till then I am waking up again and again |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssss) Yes, and I truly believe that he will cover the insurance for us all and though we cannot see the signs of direction the faith we old is that compass rose that leads us on. We have the music in all our hearts, gotta love Dido's music too! (smiles) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sudhir This is intense and sad...with a touch of what sounds like sarcasm. I hope life gets better for you.  |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Gives me a new perspective Good write Thomas |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...just sad and beautiful...touches me deeply, I love Dido, Thank You...for sharing this here with me. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
A different write from you my friend. I hope it is drawn from imagination and not reality Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, Interloper is right, hope is drawn from imagination and not reality, enjoyed. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you so very much, each one of you, my dear friends... Actually last week on Friday, some one got into my apartment, and walked away with my most beloved hi-fi music system... and left behind my 100+ cds and another 75+ tapes... leaving me with no possibility to listen to any music anymore... I am so angry for that... but there is a hint here of the realities of life as well (sarcasm and all intended) as some of you have so correctly picked up... Regards, Sudhir |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
When reality breaks into rubbish, then time finds the door. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks a lot, moonlight romeo... for coming by and leaving behind a splendid thought... regards, sudhir |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Sudhir, This reminds me of a poem I wrote a while ago called Fragile acetate/She will suffer -- the same idea where music is shred and left like bones of memories once she leaves. I loved this. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Sudhir.... So sorry to hear this happened to you. ~hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this Sudhir...James |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you very much, Mike, Nancy and James... for coming by and reading the spiralling... Regards to all of you, Sudhir |
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