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Magician Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 126 |
I know deep down inside There’s someone I recall Someone who left to hide Before the change to fall Got to find the voice to shout No matter what the cost Somehow let the someone out Before the voice is lost I know it never ends Eyes blinking it all away But the pain never mends And his words go astray The rift opens wider yet Bridges burning, falling down Crushing reality starts to set And curses the broken ground I know that someone’s here There are traces in the ash and smoke Seems like a grey and truthful tear As the remembrance begins to choke The pieces of someone left to fade To scatter as something less By constant purging in slow degrade As he becomes nothingness I know the pieces fit If only for a moment today I know that this is it The moment has gone away |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I know deep down inside There’s someone I recall Someone who left to hide Before the change to fall I like this very much. A moment of remembrance it seems. Well written with a gentle flow. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write...with much to ponder here. Enjoyed thoroughly by this reader. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is wonderfully expressed, seek and you shall find, yay, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Magician, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
oh yes...I know that someone--smiling, sometimes I see someone's eyes in the mirror--and for a brief second, I remember. I love this--so glad I went looking this morning, I went "seeking" this morn--back to the top--well written stuff here! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Looking through the haze to see the reality can be a very good thing...smiling here at this lovely...thank you! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great rhyme scheme and beautiful concept...there's always someone there  |
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smitty-j Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 72Florida, USA |
I can't believe this one got only 6 replies...time for a recount methinks cheers J |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I love the finale In fact, I love the whole piece! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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