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feeling numb.
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feeling numb. |
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clumsy Member
since 2002-10-10
Posts 106canada. |
last night we went to see murder by numbers with the boy who never leaves his house and so it was me, you and you sitting in the movie theatre finding the truth of what is and what isn't but, i never wanted the night to end and i wonder if today will be as magical as last night and i wonder ifi will manage to forget all those hopeless memories that seem to get in my way of fairy's but you were that fairy- i guess i'm still surprised that you would think my secret was not real, but i love you any ways, as a friend and i think you must hate the word love after all you've been through, but i will say it anyways iloveyou and ani difranco plays on my cd player and i'm trying not to cry, or to feel numb but it's so easy now so easy not to feel. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome to Passions! This piece is very well done. I like the numbing effect of the opening, and you carried the emotion all the way through. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
You and Doreen should work together! lol I like the theme of the poem, and the way you laid out the final lines. |
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