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| Open Poetry #22 |
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An Ocean of Thoughts |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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An Ocean of Thoughts An ocean of thoughts laps my shore And saps the sand to evermore. And I am drawn into the sea The dawning of eternity The crest of waves fall figure eight And I am pulled into its fate Tossed and tumbled and turned around Confounded in the fates rebound. I hear the bells of time that toll They vibrate in my very soul And though I drag my anchors weight I know inside there is a date. And so I wait the sickles sweep To grate me into dust of reap And make of me a source to be The essence of Eternals Sea Yet an ocean of thoughts still lap Or are they too, just changed to scrap? |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
We all await the sickles sweep I see today your thoughts run deep it may be that such things we keep don't worry sir you sow we reap Enjoyed |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Morning Sy... enjoyed as usual... and sometimes the thougths are of nothing but time...and how little there is of it. good stuff my friend. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Drowning in your dreams...nicely done Seye |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
It all goes by in the blink of an eye... Excellent morning read Sy. ~Morning hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
An ocean of thoughts laps my shore And saps the sand to evermore. And I am drawn into the sea The dawning of eternity The crest of waves fall figure eight And I am pulled into its fate ================================== I understand this now on a deeper level ... and I too feel the pull...I miss the tide more than I have words for. As always walking on your "beaches of understand" takes me to new places of humanity. Love ya Sybabes    |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good Morning, Mr. T.-- Outdid yourself again, I see! I just read RSWells reply. If he doesn't mind, I'd like to say "ditto"! ~ May your grace, dignity, and wisdom sail across this blue sea, for decades to come! ~ EA |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour - haven't we all thought about our "time's up" call? It's out of our hands though. Besides, to-day is sunny and mild here, the leaves are showing off their colours....what a blessing to have even just to-day!! hugs to you, Chris  p.s. I did enjoy this write!! Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sey good morning. I believe you have touched upon something we all have thought at times. Very well done. If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A thoughtful piece Seymour...life is terminal...we must live it to the fullest..hang on to every precious second of it...drag our anchors... |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Sy, You have a great way of looking at things. It's always from a slant that is off-angle from the norm, yet it makes so much sense. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Loved the way this was expressed Seymour !!! Time and tide ebb and flow the ocean Often I walk the shore spilling my emotion Hope |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Thinking Cap. ...so, the essence of all you gave, must be the measurement of if you're saved.... Well, I'd say, you're in like Flynn, kind sir, and we all will fly..... How blessed we are to have you Warmly, Pat without surrender, be on good terms with all persons... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To all my friends, things are going so fast here fixing the house, new cmputer and all the rest can't seem to find time to do what I want. But I do thank you one and all, with a and and I also expect to have a new email I'll let you know when I know. |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
An ocean of thoughts... a sea of memories... I don't go a day without reading you... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes SY...we do all await this moment...for some...way to early....and then there are those who sit and wait for that moment... smiling, having had a full life... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elan A very kind comment, thank you. Barry, That's true, thanks for the read. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Yes, it is all a matter in embracing each of these layers of thoughts and let them ebb before us and soak up the nutrients that evade the sands and once we find that inner=peace then we can gladly become one with the sea! (big huggssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
You drag that anchor's weight very well, Sy.... I love this nautical theme... You did a fantastic job with it.  ~ loving chipmunk hugsLyra |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ah but I loved this one, and Richard's response to you - now that would be something to see - the two of you playing lines off each other - and you both could do it so well! Oh this was a keeper for my heart. Howdy Neighbour |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Excellent expression, as always, Sy! |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
I also enjoyed this one, Sy. Dawn |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To the above I did not answer I thank you all. I did write individuals answers but some how lost it. Thank you again. |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
"To grate me into dust of reap...." Impressive! |
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