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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-10-11 03:02 AM




The lake is clear as crystal
And the color is sapphire blue
The pine trees add to the scenery
Complimenting this lovely view

Snow capped mountains in the distance
Add to this majestic sight
An eagle catches the thermals
As we watch him in graceful flight

Surrounded by nature's finest
We inhale the cool clean air
As we lie here on the blanket
You run your fingers through my hair

I've prepared a feast for two
Upon which we will dine
We'll save our loving for dessert
Beneath the warm sunshine

You whisper to me sweet nothings
As you tenderly kiss my face
I pull your body in closer
To feel the warmth of your embrace

And when the day has ended
While we watch the setting sun
I'll give myself to you
As our two hearts beat as one


I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
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since 2000-12-17
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Portland, Oregon
1 posted 2002-10-11 04:05 AM




(smiles) Sooooooooo romantic, sweet friend, awwwwwww, your heart always shines with such purity and innocence of love, I love it! (kiss on cheek) May love always shine in you like crystal, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2002-10-11 12:04 PM


Beautiful imagery

Cold hands means a warm heart

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise
3 posted 2002-10-11 05:25 PM


Breathtaking!!!

I want to go there and just sit with a cup of tea and stare at the beauty.

Hugs my friend, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
California
4 posted 2002-10-11 06:41 PM


This is great! Can get away just by viewing the photo and reading the verse. Thanks, I needed that..

Warmly,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
5 posted 2002-10-11 11:41 PM


Your brush strokes painted a lovely and loving picture and the photo seemed to be a copy of it...
~ loving hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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