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regards2you
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0 posted 2002-10-10 10:11 PM




Our eyes

caress each other

with unspoken

secrets.

Our feelings

unite

imperceptibly.

As if by magic

I know

when he is near.

God, how much

I love him.

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

© Copyright 2002 Patricia L.Thompson - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-10-10 10:12 PM


Dang it!!! This poem makes me miss my Liam. Good write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

regards2you
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2 posted 2002-10-10 10:18 PM


Loner23....

Now see, I knew I could get more than two words out of you! Glad you like it and am sorry for your separation. He is in the service..oops, being nosy.
Did ya get my message on your friend poem? Big smile...

Warmly,
Pat

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

the_loner_23
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3 posted 2002-10-10 10:27 PM


Yeah Pat I got it and thank you.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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4 posted 2002-10-10 11:36 PM


Pat, this poem is very good. Thank you for sharing your work.


Love and Best Wishes,
Ethel

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5 posted 2002-10-10 11:59 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is gorgeous, and may loves smile always fill your golden heart, yay!!! This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Patricia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2002-10-11 12:55 PM


hey, this really sounds like love.   
regards2you
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7 posted 2002-10-11 01:11 AM


Ethel and Noah, thanks.

Auguste, well, then I did good, huh?
it was supposed to sound like love.
...and...it WAS love..appreciating you I'll take that to mean you like this.
Thanks Pat

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

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