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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2002-10-10 06:36 PM

Me~
an intricated
most complicated
jumble of thoughts
when my mind goes to fast
and I can’t slow down.

Me~
a caring
heartfelt sharing
person who values friendship
and family above all else.

Me~
often moody
also looney
but always with
a serious side.

Me~
tries to be
for others to see
a friend who listens
and never condemns.

Me~
sometimes writing crappy
sometimes writing sappy
but always at least
giving it a try.

Me~
at times showing
and not knowing
what’s in store
but always growing.

Me~
no matter who
the world does see
I’m always just
lil’ ole ~ME ~

A revision on a poem from
a challenge from another forum
a few years ago.

Theres a man in his own prison
for a crime nobody knows
he has sentenced himself to die
with no pardon or parol...
He's Lonely~~~

as sung by Tracy Lawrence...

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...
[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (10-11-2002 12:42 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-10-10 06:38 PM

Awesome work. I like this a lot

Cold hands means a warm heart

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2002-10-10 06:46 PM

...and I like "lil' ole" ~ YOU ~ !!!

Linda

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

3 posted 2002-10-10 10:00 PM

Well, I am sure glad you are lil' ole you.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-10-10 10:52 PM

~And we love you, just the way you are!!~

~Hugs, Nancy~

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2002-10-10 10:54 PM

Gentle Spirit - sounds like a great person to me...

BC

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-10-10 11:51 PM

(smiles) Yay!!! And that is all that matters, being the wonderful beautiful loving and special person you are and friend! Yay!!! (kiss on cheek) This is delightful, sweet friend, thank you so much for being YOU, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

7 posted 2002-10-11 01:00 AM

I believe I like "Me" very much, because she's as human as us all and a very fine lady.

*hugs* my friend.

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

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