Open Poetry #22 |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
They ‘Tween Twain and Tennyson Rod and Keats Somewhere on paper ‘neath my sheets Some inspired t’wards passion in word They come ‘round soon to be heard Feeding on glimmers of ghost Wm would raise a glass in toast To see the seekers in their search To write of love or slender birch They that teach a child to read Others who on word would feed Sustenance being a volume or two As pages turn, the soul renewed They find entwined their rhyme Of heart They learn their mind can find Its part And pray they with tongue will forever speak While other theys, their words, will tweak Come be among the countless theys that lift their quill and write their praise that pass the song, the torch, the living That write, to write they, that are giving They, that tell the story clear in form of ballad we hold dear Our histories, our compassion flies Never buried ‘neath Sol’s blue skies Pick up the book there, on the shelf revive, with they, that, within your self Seek the black upon the white And thank God they took to write Thank God they were bound to write Thank God we are one of them They, that keep ink fresh within their pen |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
your ink is always fresh... and your pen always appreciated. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Thank God they were bound to write Thank God we are one of them They, that keep ink fresh within their pen" (smiles) This is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, I to admire many of the great classic writers as I always love to explore for those who are not as noticed too who I believe have special hidden talents! (big hugggsssss) This is a wonderful tribute, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-10-2002 04:13 PM).] |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thoughtful and full of heart... enjoyed, dear Sunshine... *hugs* ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sunshine, you say it all in your beautiful work. Thanks for sharing your heart. Love to all, Ethel |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Hey there madame mum, this is just spectacular and they.......have blessed us with their words as you always also do. HugS YOU If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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someonespecial Junior Member
since 2002-10-10
Posts 10 |
Alot of thought went into your writing. I enjoyed it very much. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Oh the countless theys who spur written ways Through stormy skies and soul filled sighs Oh the countless theys Yes KJ....WE are one of them, aren't we? Nicely done poet lady... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
You give the classics blood. Which is good, since many only give them mind. Awesome, Karilea! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wonderful Karilea!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You certainly have been writing wonderful poems on what being a poet is all about---and you should know, because you, dear Karilea, are one of the finest! Linda |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
And you my dear friend... rank right up there with them! Wonderful words Karilea... ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Those you speak of definitely rank right up as the world's best. And you my dear, are not far behind.... Hugs, Marti Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is so very special, Karilea... and I agree with Nancy... YOU are definitely one of them... and this is definitely a ~ loving chipmunk hugs Lyra |
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