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Circles Above the Waves |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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The sun is a true end, she said, laced with small beginnings. (I had asked her hand to know) She removed. She left the pier. Turned to watch the ocean set. Colors spilled their inky stars. Traced circles above the waves, made a waste of lines and need. The wind burned by in solemn tones, dropping deadfall ragged song. Understood its taste, salt's weight. Pilings broke the wood soft surf. Should I swim for one green light? Or the sun's bright red, alarmed? Spread distance. Its stopping breath. The tide rolled on. The tide rolled on. |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
My baby is obsessed with the ocean.  Love you and your poety mind. remember the sound |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
As I love you. *kiss* Expect an e-mail shortly. And yep, I'm obsessed! (strange for someone who doesn't like layin' on the beach) |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
bsquirrel, I love the way you write these beautiful pictures of the ocean. Thanks With love To All, Ethel |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Awww... this is so pretty! Hello to you and Lori! ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks, Ethel and Tiersdin. Miss ya, Robin! E-mail me a new poem idea if you've got one... The other one is dead in the water. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
the solemn ragged weight of a decision torn asunder but the sea remains wow, Mike you write with lead |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thank you, brian. Sometimes lead, sometimes waves, sometimes light, always me. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I think...you should swim to the publisher...  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Turned to watch the ocean set. Colors spilled their inky stars. Traced circles above the waves, made a waste of lines and need. The wind burned by in solemn tones, dropping deadfall ragged song. Understood its taste, salt's weight. Pilings broke the wood soft surf. =========================================== I love the way you mix the ocean and emotion, now that I have been taken by the tide...I cherish the words even more. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Should I swim for one green light? Or the sun's bright red, alarmed? Spread distance. Its stopping breath. The tide rolled on. The tide rolled on. ----------------------------------------- Fantastic Mikey!! Love the images. There is something so awesome and powerful about the ocean..you capture it well. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is lovely, Mr.Squirrel... I love the imagery, but I never realized that squirrels loved the ocean so much...  ~ hugs and acorns from the seaLyra |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thank you all. And Lyra? Acorns from the Sea should be the title of a book -- or at the very least, a poem. |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Exceedingly profound! |
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