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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach 
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tenderly he sang ~~ as his fingers traced my lips ~~ serenade of love Chris B. Sept. 2002 ~~ [This message has been edited by Nightshade (09-15-2002 09:17 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
send me your kisses to P.O Box Destiny My Heart, from your lips   (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is so cute and so clever, I love it, you always amaze me with your beautiful romantic poetry, may every day bring you great happiness that comes in billions of small packages, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Beautifully done! Nan(Pilgrim variety) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Chris! And I love Noah's reply! Love ya hugs, Teed ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Noah - Well now, there you are again....with a reply so sweet it melts my heart. Thankyou dear. Pilgrimage - Thankyou for enjoying. Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Nancylee - thanks Teed. I have no idea where it came from....well...I mean it came from my muse...but...well..someone tracing my lips and ummmm...well..luv ya -nighty nite!!  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Chris - tenderly he sang ~~ as his fingers traced my lips ~~ serenade of love words of tenderness ~~ as softness felt of you ~~ melody of affection BC |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh Bill!! That's an awesome reply!! Thankyou for reading and signing - or should I say "serenading"? Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
absolutely beautiful Chris..... If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Donna - thankyou sweet lady. Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
This is the song That needs no words. Thank you What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Thank you for your "delightful serenade of love"!!! ~ smiles ~ Linda |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nightshade Good one. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
M.Romeo - that's a lovely thing to say. thankyou. Linda - Thankyou for reading and commenting. Seymour - many thanks dear poet. Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
She spoke not a word For she was like a flower And needed no voice paladin |
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The Crimson Knight Member
since 2002-09-16
Posts 57Reno, NV |
Not sure of the form, Lips touching soft, ~~~~ ~~Lip to lip or fingertip,~~ ~~~~ Passion in touching. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
paladin - what a lovely reply! Thankyou. Crimson Knight - very nice. Thankyou, and since I haven't seen your name before.....Welcome To Passions!! Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very nicely done Chris....soft and passionate... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Magnus - I appreciate your comments, thankyou.. Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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*Stubby* Member
since 2002-09-19
Posts 122 |
Very nice thankyou  J |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Nightshade - lovely, come trace my lips, for they are yours... BC |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Stubby - thankyou for reading and commenting. Bill - oooh, that's the best offer I have had all day!! lol. Thanks!! Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
What a tranquil and loving image you've given us, Chris. I love this. Thank you! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
This is lovingly sensual...and very passionate... ...believe what your heart feels..... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Michael - thankyou for your kind words. JamesMichael - thankyou for reading and commenting. scorpio - thanks I am glad you enjoyed. Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Wow! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Rad - thanks for enjoying!! Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
I'd love a melody de amour to serende at my window too! But pesky birds might have to be shooed! Good show! |
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