Open Poetry #22 |
FORGIVING |
regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
I cannot forgive you until I can forgive myself. For, it was I who decided it was safe to put my feelings in your care. without surrender, be on good terms with all persons... |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
Hey---this one sounds all too familiar to me! Man, I sure know how this feels! Keep this up, the short work is often the best! All I do, is think about you... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Pat, I enjoyed you beautiful work again. Thanks for sharing. With Love To All, Ethel |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I believe forgiveness of self tends to be much harder than forgiving others. This one made me think and I love it when a writer can do that. Thanks, Ethel The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Patricia, I can relate to this, sweet friend, I agree with Michael that it is so much harder to forgive ones self and I hope now you have found the courage to do so! (big hugggsssss) This is sincerely heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Patricia, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes..it starts within ourselves. nice short work.... enjoyed it for brevity and content... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Android17, thank you. Haven't read you yet. Do I know you? Ethel, thank you. the-loner-23, you got that phrase on an "F" key someplace???? Just kidding, glad you like it. Auguste, Thank you. Me, too, you! Noah, yes I have forgiven myself and it is an every other day occurance. LOL thanks for kind words. Cpat Hair thanks for taking the time to critque. Glad you liked it. without surrender, be on good terms with all persons... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice thoughts...we all make mistakes...James |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
forgiving fully is not an easy task,but essential...a wonderful write on the topic aloha, Cher Poetry is: |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Forgive yourself indeed but not for Loving....not for that. Enjoyed. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
James, so true. Thank you. Cher, thanks. R>S> Wells, that's true, glad you enjoyed. ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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