Open Poetry #22 |
He Tries To Describe His Love To Me |
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
HE TRIES TO DESCRIBE HIS LOVE TO ME Such beautiful poems and songs he always writes to me He also paints colorful pictures with words, you see His love for me is as beautiful as can be A FOREVER LOVE we have found I do believe He says if he could describe his love in just a single word It would start with "A", end in "Z" one no-one's ever heard His words are as beautiful as the song of a bird They are the sweetest words that I have ever heard His love would circle the Heavens and back, until the end of time If his love for me he could write in just a single line Pictures he draws for me in all colors oh, so very fine And to think this wonderful man is forever mine He can't describe his love for me in just a single day He says there would certainly be no possible way And to try would make him feel bad and sad, he did say If he had to describe his love for me in just a single day If he had to describe his love for me in just a single song He says it would be the greatest ballad ever to be sung And that it would surely be a million, billion hours long If he had to describe his love for me in just a single song He says he can't describe his love for me in just a single life He asked me if I would please become his loving wife With this wonderful love we have there surely would not be much strife He wants to describe his love for me for all of our life To describe his love he says there is just not enough time or ways But he promises to keep trying for the rest of our days And from our FOREVER LOVE we both promise not to stray And we promise to love each other forever and forever, and a day [This message has been edited by garysgirl (10-10-2002 09:21 AM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
those kinds of promises, when kept, are the best kind... nice work my friend... nice work |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kielo, You took me on a magic carpet ride and I loved it. Thank you for posting. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Have you accepted his proposal of marriage? With that kind of love for each other, I'm sure it will last forever and a day! ~ May all your days together be filled with sunlight and your nights bathed in the glow of the moon and the stars ~ Linda |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
'... And from our FOREVER LOVE we both promise not to stray And we promise to love each other forever and forever, and a day ...' You are one very lucky couple to have such love and devotion for each other. A beautiful, loving poem and I liked it very much. Great job. Now you hang onto that guy ... hugs, Marti |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Cpat, oh yes, they sure are. As is obvious, I'm sure, I got this inspiration from a poem he wrote to me a couple of years ago. Seymour, thanks for reading and your poetic comments. (Kielo??? Oops!) Linda, oh yes, we are engaged. But because of circumstances beyond our control, we aren't "legally" married yet. We will be, though (and already are "one" in our spirits and hearts). In the meantime, we see each other as much as possible and talk on the phone every day (enormous long distance calls). I'm going to go to see him this weekend. I'm SOOOOOO excited!! Thanks for your comments, dear lady. WITH LOVE AND BEST WISHES TO ALL |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sorry, Marti, I missed you, there. Thanks so much for your sweet, loving comments. And, oh yes, I plan to hold onto my wonderful Gary for FOREVER AND A DAY. Best Wishes And Love To All, Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Ethel, this made me cry because it is sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, love like that is so rare nowadays and I am so happy you have found it! I sure hope he proposes to you soon as if I could I would love to try and come on your wedding day! (smiles) God Bless You Both, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Noah, thank you so very much for your sweet, heartfelt reply. You are such a good person, I can tell. Thanks for reading and leaving your reply. I appreciate your thoughts so much. And, oh yes, we are already engaged. But, like I said earlier, due to some circumstancs I won't mention now, we aren't married yet. We will be very soon, we hope. I am going to see him this weekend, though!!!! Thank you. Love To All, Ethel/garysgirl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice thoughts on the road to forever...James |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
James, thank you so much for reading my poem and for replying to it. I appreciate it. Love to All, Ethel....garysgirl |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
You have a keeper then...does he have a brother? Someone who likes poetry and long walks in the moonlight along the beach or in the woods or on the top of a mountain and someone who truly has a sense of the ridiculous and a good grasp of English and the art of the long sentence? LOL Enjoyed your poem.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
PoetDevine...thanks so much for reading my poem and for your reply. I appreciate it. I've been reading your poetry on the main site for a long time...long before I joined here. I love your poetry. Thanks. Love To All, Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
some loves just can't be described |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fortunately, love does not have to be described and lived in just one day...it unfolds in beautiful layers...James |
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