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Mindless Boggle
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Mindless Boggle |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York 
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Quite driven away from this mindless boggle temptation is not new this week I seem to speak no words leave behind A subtle hearts broken rhythem a tear drop fades within a faint whisper in the darkness soft laughter ringing from the bells silent sing tomorrow as if it has already past silence your heart today create a mindless future leave the ashen musk to settle all today |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Oh Kellie, you speak with such words of truth, I love this, this is powerfully sincere and provoking, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kellie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Miss T. Eyed Junior Member
since 2002-05-26
Posts 47 |
I'm seeing sadness, and pain in this poem, I hope life brings along some happier shades of emotion. Thanks for sharing here with us. |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
I really liked this, it had a lovley kind of elegant tone to it, if that makes any sense, anyway this was sad but beautiful, anya |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Soft laughter ringing from the bells"--- I'll never listen to the ring of bells again, without thinking of this beautiful line. Thank You! Love, Light & Laughter Earth Angel [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-10-2002 01:26 PM).] |
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