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CSKpoet
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since 2002-07-12
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Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-10-09 07:46 AM



Lay your head back lover,
Relax your troubled mind,
Let me fill your world with peace,
Leave the past behind.

Fill the night with pleasure,
Sweet, erotic bliss,
Movement of both place and time,
Suspended with a kiss.

Lift your heart to soar above,
Gaze into my eyes,
The single sound to reach our ears,
Love's releasing sighs.

Entwined as one, A single cord,
We'll surrender in the night,
Staying here forever,
In the moon's caressing light.

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

© Copyright 2002 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
1 posted 2002-10-09 07:50 AM


Whew! This is a hot one gal...good write...and that little line thinggie ya have at the end of your poems?...."Poetry is: Passion, imagination and intellect running together".....Who ever wrote that sure didn't base that after reading one of my "masterpieces"......LOL....(We won't go into "master pieces of what"...okay?)
CSKpoet
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since 2002-07-12
Posts 845
Island in Paradise
2 posted 2002-10-09 07:55 AM


Ahh yes, my friend, I will have to re-write the signature to include humor and wit..*smiles* thanks for the read and your comments
aloha, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-10-09 09:44 AM




(smiles) Awwwwww, this is soooooo lovely, sweet friend, such gorgeous passion always fills your words! (big hugggsssss) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2002-10-09 10:02 AM


CSKpoet
Dear poet I'm caught beneath the words you fling.
For heavens sake don't pull the string.
LOL Sy

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