Open Poetry #22 |
Long Time No See... |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(This weekend I was gone visiting my grandma and grandpa in Cape Giradeau, Missouri to celebrate their 50th anniversary, yay!!! While I anticipated much joy in that, I did not anticipate my dear cousins arrival, who I love so very much and have not seen in almost a whole decade. I cried in joy seeing them and my 20-year old cousin Michelle said she read my poetry secretly all the time and said she is so happy to see me as I was her and the whole family! She even said she may join Passions this week or soon! Yay! Here's a special song based on the experience I wrote!) Long Time No See By: Noah Eaton 10/8/02 I boarded a 747 for St. Louis Early on a Saturday afternoon as the sun began to rise Stopped at the Cracker Barrel for some catfish Before making my way south down I-55 Drove south down to Cape Giradeau Making reservations at the Drury Inn Two shots of cappucinno and a pillow chocolate later And I'm on my way to visit... And I hear you say Sha-la-la-la-la Long time no see And I say Sha-la-la-la-la Long time no see... Long time no see... You were over there in your favorite chair by the veranda Reading your favorite novel by Margaret Atwood Nicky is running around with his digital camera Taking as many photographs as he could I came across your precious smiles inadvertently You took my heart by suprise You could see those familiar tears falling from my eyes And you hugged me and cried And you said, Sha-la-la-la-la Long time no see And I said Sha-la-la-la-la Long time no see... My sweet cousin... Grandma's in the kitchen whipping up some of her Ramen cole slaw Grandpa's off to the Frontier Kitchen to pick up deli meat Aunt Kim's smoking a cigarette on the front porch Throwing it aside and hugs me when she first sees me I stayed down in Cape Giradeau till late in the evening Listening to what we all had to say and listening to cassettes of Brooks & Dunn Played ten rounds of Shanghai on four cups of lemonade Even after hours, the night still seemed so very young You reminded me Goethe says "The right man is the one that seizes the moment!" So where do I sign to retract this furlough? Mark this day as my official inauguration To a renewed love of family that will only continue to grow And you said, Sha-la-la-la-la Long time no see And I said Sha-la-la-la-la Long time no see... My sweet cousin... Waffle irons and coffee spoons clang the very next morning After we watched Moulin Rouge on HBO in the middle of the night Continental breakfast and a 10:00 break to the Citgo D-Mart next door And back up the road we go to grandma and grandpa's house at noontide I took your hand and walked down the quiet road with you Saw the lilacs and the tiger lilies in the fields scattered about We walked down to the front of Clarence's Ranch Saw the llamas and the donkeys and the horses prancing around You said "I want to be an English professor!" I said I dream of becoming one too and we cheered each other on with youth And we hugged that final hour before it was time to go home Saying, "Here's my e-mail address, please e-mail me soon!" And you said, Sha-la-la-la-la Long time no see And I said Sha-la-la-la-la Long time no see... My sweet cousin... Sha-la-la-la-la Long time no see And I said Sha-la-la-la-la Long time no see... My sweet cousin... It's so great to see you... Hope to see you again soon... "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-08-2002 09:35 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
When Michelle gets here, she will be so surprised to see a poem dedicated to her. Let me know if I miss her sign-in Noah...you know we will want to greet more family! |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Like Al Green's Sha-la-la- Make Me Happy, you obviously knew where your heart was destined to be that weekend. Loved the itinary, Noah, espec. the Atwood reference, as i could picture so plainly the house's setting, like a stage, and the actors playing themselves, enjoying natural performance. Yay! and wonder-smiles to a bud, jeff |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Fantastic song Noah!! Hey sidekick..let me know the minute she gets here.. so we can give her a big PiP welcome! Great write sweet Noah! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Great write Mistletoe Angel...thank you for taking us along on this visit back home...who says you can't go back?? ...believe what your heart feels..... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Noah - what a lovely reunion!! Thankyou for sharing this with us sweet poet. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Sounds like fun. If only I didn't have a disfunctional family. LOL Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
YAYYYY so excited for you sweet friend.....many more happy years of keeping in touch!!! Lauren~ I need some distraction |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
What a happy, fun time! Wonderful writing Noah, it's great to see you full of joy. *Krista Knutson* |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ohhhh, That was so special, sweet Noah. Like the others, I felt like I was there with all of you. Your "other family" sounds like they love you as much as your "family of friends" love you. How could anybody keep from loving sweet Noah?!? Your loving ways come across in every word you say, whether it be in your poetry, your song, or your comments to other people. I also want to know when your cousin "gets here" so I can give her a welcome too. By the way, I missed you over the week-end, as I know everyone else did!! If everything works out, I'll be going to see my Gary this week-end. I'll miss all of you sweet people, but I sure do want to see my darling, Gary!! Thanks for sharing your weekend with us, Noah. With Love To All, Ethel....garysgirl |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - your write brings back so many fond memories of visiting with grandparents. This is just full of life... BC |
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Singing Sparrow Member
since 2002-05-12
Posts 94 |
great to see you had a wonderful time there, hope to read her philosophies here too soon! SS |
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