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Toerag
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Ala bam a

0 posted 2002-10-08 03:37 PM


It's easy writin' poetry,
I do it all the time,
It's usually quite silly,
And I'm lucky if it rhymes.

Most of my crap is senseless,
My conversations too,
Some say that I'm incorrigible,
(In fact there's quite a few).

I usually don't have much to say,
In fact that's almost every day.
But criticism doesn't get me down,
I'm as good at saying nothing, as anyone around.

My teachers they all loved me,
I had to be their favorite.
They were always coming over,
And talking with my parents.

They were at my house,
More than I was at the school,
Notes to home for autographs,
(They must have thought that I was cool)

Now I are more smarter,
With children of my own,
My daughter is an angel,
My son's another TOE!!!
(Oh Woe)

Now ya know me better,
(And it's the Lord's revenge)
What comes around-goes around,
And I'm payin' for my sins!!

[This message has been edited by Toerag (10-08-2002 03:47 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Toerag - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-10-08 03:39 PM


LOL

Cold hands means a warm heart

Irie
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since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493
Washington State
2 posted 2002-10-08 03:49 PM


Oh Toe sometimes it’s ‘bout nothin’
But that’s OK with me
Your words of silliness
Fill my day with glee

I’m glad you’re here with us!

~Sheri

"Don't wait for your ship to come in ...
Swim out to it"

Sinful_Steph
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since 2002-10-03
Posts 35
Toronto, Ontario (Canada)
3 posted 2002-10-08 03:54 PM


LOL......I know what you mean.  I put my parents through hell and I have a daughter who everyone says is exactly like me.  Although she's still young, god fobid she follows in my footsteps.  If she does...I have alot of headaches to look forward to and many nights of ahead of me.

Nice write!



"Love me little, Love me long, Is the burden of my song" - Robert Herrick

[This message has been edited by Sinful_Steph (10-08-2002 03:57 PM).]

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2002-10-08 04:34 PM


Toe, ya got me wonnerin'! 'Sides skippin' school, what other sins might ya've bin guilty of?

No, never mind, I'll just keep the saintly image that I have of you!---NOT! hehe

I love your spirit and your sense of humor!

Linda



Titia Geertman
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5 posted 2002-10-08 04:40 PM



Think about this Toe...he could even be worse LOL

Your words of saying nothing
Bring laughter to my mind
Because they are not senseless
They're always clever kind

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Mysteria
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6 posted 2002-10-09 03:05 AM


Brother have I seen this one before!  They live by example and as the cliche goes, "you reap what you soe" or something like that LOL, and this was much adieu about nothing!  Okay, I am out of here, enjoyed this Toerag.

Howdy Neighbour
        
    Sharon  

suthern
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7 posted 2002-10-09 07:27 AM


Most of my crap is senseless,
My conversations too,
Some say that I'm incorrigible,
(In fact there's quite a few)

Well this gal loves your poems
And your conversations too
Incorrigible or not, sweet man
I do so enjoy you! *G*


My daughter is an angel,
My son's another TOE!!!
(Oh Woe)

ROFLMAO!!!! This is absolutely delightful, Toe... all the more so because it's gospel truth! LOL

So whatsamatta? *G* You're without groceries again??? LOL I love this!!! *G*

Toerag
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Ala bam a
8 posted 2002-10-09 07:31 AM


Suthern...you have no idea of what you just said!!! that's exactly what happened and I raised hell!!!....He's useless as teats on a nun and HE DIDN'T get the groceries which inspired this garbage!!
CSKpoet
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since 2002-07-12
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Island in Paradise
9 posted 2002-10-09 08:12 AM


You are the cream in the coffee..collorful and witty..I love it

Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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10 posted 2002-10-09 08:18 AM


I love this     
It made me smile this morning, a delightful write!

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

garysgirl
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11 posted 2002-10-09 09:09 AM


Toerag, I loved this...the poem, the humor, the "toerag" name....all of it. I love the comments you make to other people, too. About the comments they make to you and your comments to their poems. You have a great sense of humor. Does "little Toe" have a sense of humor, too? Thanks for sharing "you".

Best wishes and Love to all,
Ethel

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
12 posted 2002-10-09 09:16 AM


Hey Toe!!  Thanks for the morning grins!!
~Big Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
13 posted 2002-10-09 09:28 AM


Toe,
Your apple fell and hit me on the head. Did you have to remind me? You are not the exception but the rule. LOL Enjoyed

suthern
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14 posted 2002-10-09 09:36 AM


ROFLMAO!!!! Oh, sweets... that's classic!! LOL Knowing what he was supposed to do and then seeing this poem... I couldn't help but wonder! LOL
Madame Chipmunk
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Michigan
15 posted 2002-10-09 06:03 PM


This is cute, Mr.Toe...  Does he write poetry also?
~ lots of chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Radrook
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16 posted 2002-10-14 05:25 PM


Wow!
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