Open Poetry #22 |
What Comes Around-Goes Around |
Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
It's easy writin' poetry, I do it all the time, It's usually quite silly, And I'm lucky if it rhymes. Most of my crap is senseless, My conversations too, Some say that I'm incorrigible, (In fact there's quite a few). I usually don't have much to say, In fact that's almost every day. But criticism doesn't get me down, I'm as good at saying nothing, as anyone around. My teachers they all loved me, I had to be their favorite. They were always coming over, And talking with my parents. They were at my house, More than I was at the school, Notes to home for autographs, (They must have thought that I was cool) Now I are more smarter, With children of my own, My daughter is an angel, My son's another TOE!!! (Oh Woe) Now ya know me better, (And it's the Lord's revenge) What comes around-goes around, And I'm payin' for my sins!! [This message has been edited by Toerag (10-08-2002 03:47 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
LOL Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Oh Toe sometimes it’s ‘bout nothin’ But that’s OK with me Your words of silliness Fill my day with glee I’m glad you’re here with us! ~Sheri |
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Sinful_Steph Junior Member
since 2002-10-03
Posts 35Toronto, Ontario (Canada) |
LOL......I know what you mean. I put my parents through hell and I have a daughter who everyone says is exactly like me. Although she's still young, god fobid she follows in my footsteps. If she does...I have alot of headaches to look forward to and many nights of ahead of me. Nice write! "Love me little, Love me long, Is the burden of my song" - Robert Herrick [This message has been edited by Sinful_Steph (10-08-2002 03:57 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Toe, ya got me wonnerin'! 'Sides skippin' school, what other sins might ya've bin guilty of? No, never mind, I'll just keep the saintly image that I have of you!---NOT! hehe I love your spirit and your sense of humor! Linda |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Think about this Toe...he could even be worse LOL Your words of saying nothing Bring laughter to my mind Because they are not senseless They're always clever kind Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Brother have I seen this one before! They live by example and as the cliche goes, "you reap what you soe" or something like that LOL, and this was much adieu about nothing! Okay, I am out of here, enjoyed this Toerag. Howdy Neighbour |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Most of my crap is senseless, My conversations too, Some say that I'm incorrigible, (In fact there's quite a few) Well this gal loves your poems And your conversations too Incorrigible or not, sweet man I do so enjoy you! *G* My daughter is an angel, My son's another TOE!!! (Oh Woe) ROFLMAO!!!! This is absolutely delightful, Toe... all the more so because it's gospel truth! LOL So whatsamatta? *G* You're without groceries again??? LOL I love this!!! *G* |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Suthern...you have no idea of what you just said!!! that's exactly what happened and I raised hell!!!....He's useless as teats on a nun and HE DIDN'T get the groceries which inspired this garbage!! |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
You are the cream in the coffee..collorful and witty..I love it Cher Poetry is: |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I love this It made me smile this morning, a delightful write! If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Toerag, I loved this...the poem, the humor, the "toerag" name....all of it. I love the comments you make to other people, too. About the comments they make to you and your comments to their poems. You have a great sense of humor. Does "little Toe" have a sense of humor, too? Thanks for sharing "you". Best wishes and Love to all, Ethel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hey Toe!! Thanks for the morning grins!! ~Big Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Toe, Your apple fell and hit me on the head. Did you have to remind me? You are not the exception but the rule. LOL Enjoyed |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFLMAO!!!! Oh, sweets... that's classic!! LOL Knowing what he was supposed to do and then seeing this poem... I couldn't help but wonder! LOL |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is cute, Mr.Toe... Does he write poetry also? ~ lots of chipmunk hugs Lyra |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Wow! |
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