»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #22
»
Silver Blue Whispers
| Open Poetry #22 |
|
Silver Blue Whispers |
|
|
Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song 
|
Silver Blue Whispers Silver blue whispers beckoning passions dance Laced in copper swirls of spirit adorned caress Spring blossom smiles cascade in gentle trance Quenching my hearts desire with loving finesse Drapes of freckled embrace render healing bliss Warming this heart within your silken entwine Palm to palm unite carries breeze of spirit kiss Resting in tranquil gazes ... as two souls align Sapphire passages traced in emerald fixed daze Reveal corridors of harmony in romantic array Crystal lyrics reflected within prisms of amaze Recline in comfort against our songs of today Each sunrise cleansed in kiss of morning dew Purified in awakened stretch of blooming rose Golden blessings cradle all my thoughts of you Inspired by this tenderness your heart bestows Mark Christopher Sorry for my absence of late but life has a way of turning hours into minutes. I will be in soon to catch up a bit more than I am able to today. If time were taken from the heart of man then we would have no way to measure the pain of love |
||
| © Copyright 2002 Mark Bohannan - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I thought I'd jump in here before the line formed...  and yes, shaman poet sir, you do weave magick within your lines...and making it look easy and flow so fluidly is a sign of artistry---and someday, I will learn how to write this delicately and leave an impact. Once again you hit me over the head with a cottonball bat.  |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Drop by any time, Mark, as long as you leave lovelies like this... |
||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes, we need to read more from you.. We miss you when you're away... This is absolutely beautiful. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
||
|
NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
I enjoyed this so much. The title really grabbed me and pulled me in to beautiful thoughts and words. Marti Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. |
||
SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Drapes of freckled embrace render healing bliss Warming this heart within your silken entwine Palm to palm unite carries breeze of spirit kiss Resting in tranquil gazes ... as two souls align " *sigh* Mark, so wonderful to read your poetry again now I have the added pleasure of seeing you too! |
||
Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
another gem from your hand....enjoyed it a lot Mark ((hugs)) Charisma |
||
|
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Mark, This is so lovely. My heart heard music in your words. They started out in a soft whisper and developed into a much louder voice. I really hope to hear more of your "music". Thanks so much for sharing. With Love From Ethel.......garysgirl |
||
|
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Sapphire passages traced in emerald fixed daze Reveal corridors of harmony in romantic array Crystal lyrics reflected within prisms of amaze Recline in comfort against our songs of today"  (smiles) Yay!!! Oh Mark, your beautiful words have been so dearly missed, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all and I wish for these crystal lyrics to shine with all the facets of the heavens of pure love inside you always! (big hugggssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
||
|
the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is a very beautiful piece Cold hands means a warm heart |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mark, Missed you pal, your writing is always a delight to read and I try not to miss any. JM said she had a wonderful time and I am grateful to you for that. Sy |
||
|
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I enjoy your writing and pearls of wisdom emensely. I was pleased to see that you had posted today. I am always looking for your work. You speak softly in "Silver Blue Whispers"---but not only do I hear what you are saying--I listen. Earth Angel |
||
|
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
***************************************** Crystal lyrics reflected within prisms of amaze ***************************************** Beautiful! |
||
|
Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
A 1derful write! Nice kitty ... you must introduce it to Toerag Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
HiMarkB~ So nice to see you back with a morsel of delight~ 'Golden blessings cradle all my thoughts of you Inspired by this tenderness your heart bestows' Yes ... you would seek and find the 'blessings'~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
||
|
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Mark anytime that you drop by and grace us with beauty as this it is appreciated. This is one of your most beautiful writes from your heart pen that I have ever had the pleasure to read........just lovely sir poet. If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
||
|
brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Mark, so many beautiful lines, this is very tender. WOnderful read. El riesgo vive siempre! |
||
|
BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Each sunrise cleansed in kiss of morning dew Purified in awakened stretch of blooming rose Golden blessings cradle all my thoughts of you Inspired by this tenderness your heart bestows ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Of course I had to get in line with the rest to tell you how wonderfully gorgeous this is. It's difficult for me to choose a favorite, but this one especially touched me today. May God richly bless you! Deb |
||
|
CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
It is always a joy to be blessed with your presence and your way with words. This was soft and tender love...It is another of your gems to dazzle us. aloha and peace to your day, Cher Poetry is: |
||
|
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Silver blue whispers beckoning passions dance Laced in copper swirls of spirit adorned caress =================================== Drapes of freckled embrace render healing bliss ============================= Palm to palm unite carries breeze of spirit kiss ============================== Sapphire passages traced in emerald fixed daze ============================ Crystal lyrics reflected within prisms of amaze Each sunrise cleansed in kiss of morning dew Purified in awakened stretch of blooming rose ================================ Well well-- lookie who got his identity back LOL Are you sure those are your cookies????? hehActually I think they are mine...and that this is my post  NO? oh well I had to try...but no one would believe me anyway...this is classic MC poetry...the rhyme divine, cadence kissed, and with that imagery and personification that is your trademark... Silver blue whispers Laced in copper swirls Drapes of freckled embrace Sapphire passages traced in emerald fixed daze Crystal lyrics reflected within prisms of amaze my oh my....how lovely are those images.... Noooppers...no one could get away with taking credit for this gem of pen...so I wont even try...my mothy job is to worship it properly. Another romantic beauty Mark... we will take ya what ever time you have...and with whatever cookies |
||
|
Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well silver blue is my favorite color actually and I prefer whispering to reading out loud, and as I whispered this poem, trust me this is the first time in years I wish someone was whispering it to me, (but then I snapped back to reality). However, I have to say I loved the flow, the cadence, and of course, the perfection of this beautiful piece. Thank you Mark.Howdy Neighbour |
||
|
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
lovely words, impeccable rhyme glad you're here, though short time Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
||
|
Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
serenity - Thank you much hun and as for the cotton ball bat....hhhmmmm isn't that the prelude to something more fun.......................you know, pillow fights. Sunshine-thank u for the invite Enchantress-Thank you so much for those words and I do miss being here as well. Marti-Then I must make sure my titles always grab you. Thank you dearly SEA-So wonderful to have you here to read it as well. Thank you Charisma-It always puts a smile on my face to know that you enjoyed one of my works. Thank you dearly my sweet friend. Ethel- Those are some mighty generous words and I thank you much for that. Noah-One cannot help but smile when they are graced with your wonderful replies and I thank you very much kind sir. the_loner_23- Thank you dearly for the beautiful Sy- It is nice to be missed now and then and I do thank you for your always kind words. As for the JM thing.......would not have had it any other way ..... nope not all. Earth Angel-It please me that you are listening and I thank you for your wonderful comments. Midnitesun-Thank you much. Interloper-Well thank you and I will see what I can do about the introduction lol. Marge-Isn't that what leads us halfway home anyway? Thank you dearly my friend. Donna- For you to say that means the world to me and I do hope you know that. Thank you so very much and God Bless. Brian-Well thank you kind sir and it is always my thrill to receive a comment from a poet of your caliber. Deb-As long as at least one verse or line touched you then how could I not be elated and you know that I know of my blessings from The Lord and they are rich indeed. Thank you dearly. Cher-Well hello my friend and thank you so much for your kind words. It is a blessing to have you here as well and never doubt that. JM-Now are you sure you want to talk about cookies in public with me?  Thank you so very much my dearest and bestest friend. You know I love you dearly and somehow the tide just doesn't seem to have as much punch to it since yo left but we will make it work. Mysteria-Don't ya just hate it when we have to snap back to reality? Thank you so much for your kindness VAS-It is always a treat for me to be able to come in and I thank you for your kinds words. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (10-09-2002 02:27 PM).] |
||
|
Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Mark, you never cease to amaze me with your words. As usual - stunning. Dee Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
||
|
sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
This is a very heartfelt and beautiful piece of art. Thank you for sharing. |
||
|
ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
BEAUTIFUL!! |
||
Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sapphire passages traced in emerald fixed daze Reveal corridors of harmony in romantic array Crystal lyrics reflected within prisms of amaze Recline in comfort against our songs of today I love anything you write, as it always touches, but this just grabbed me today....thank you for sharing your soft whispers.... Lauren~ Deep inside the stillness |
||
|
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mark Your poetry is always such a pleasure to read, more than once and outloud. Like ethome said.... BEAUTIFUL! |
||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gorgeous! |
||
|
rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
An array of elements, gems, and of course emotions that are indeed precious finds. Glad to see that you are still descrying the wealth of true intimacy so passionately. Happy New Year, Rwood |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
