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Radrook
Senior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 648

0 posted 2002-10-07 10:05 PM

The balmy summer evenings came
the wind that whispered just her name
and Mona would appear to me
from realms that lie beyond the sea.

From kingdoms far beyond the sky
where old men sing and virgins sigh,
beyond the mourning of the wind
where life rejoices, songs begin.

From there she came on summer days
with wondrous tales from far away
Of limpid skies and virgin earth
Of nature pregnant in rebirth.

Of crystal realms with emerald shores
where angels sing forevermore.
Of worlds enwrapped in heaven's light
Emanating in the night.

Where shadow creatures don't exist
And beauty sets the hearts in bliss.
Where treasures garnered from afar
ten thousand worlds, ten billion stars.

Of these she spoke to me always
as she reposed in ocean spray.
The wondrous secrets I adore
and will remember evermore.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-10-07 10:08 PM

Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Radrook
Senior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 648

2 posted 2002-10-07 10:40 PM

Thanks for the encouraging feedback my friend.

Glad you enjoyed.

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

3 posted 2002-10-08 12:14 PM

Utterly superb! It reads so well.
One of my favorites. Thank you.

Pat

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-10-08 12:20 PM

Radrook, this is really good. I seemed to hear music when i read it. Thanks for sharing.
Best wishes,
Ethel

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

5 posted 2002-10-10 07:16 AM

Just re-reading this and I can't figure out why you didn't get much response to this.

It really is quite well done. I have a good feeling when reading it...

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

6 posted 2002-10-10 08:10 AM

must have missed this one... very nicely done Rad... flows wonderfully...

I enjoyed

Radrook
Senior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 648

7 posted 2002-10-11 10:51 PM

Hi!
Again thanks for your responses.
I guess that most person's frequenting this site enjoy poems of a different kind.

But that is OK.

God bless!

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