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Crunch of Stillness
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Crunch of Stillness |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Yes my love Though I am away... I am there. For, you see my lady. I shall remain at your side through each day.. each night.. In spirit, running wild, free. Running an endless race down a slope of the heart... I am there, I am in your eyes, in your blood, the breath you breathe, in your dreams, in mine. Come into the night air as breezes blow the hair of fine, the silk of flow. As our moon rises. As a wolf howls and echoes die. As we walk in crunching still of whitest flake. Touch the branch of love’s tree. Watch the finest mist of frozen tears fall from the bows of bend. Stand, shiver not as we embrace and the fires of passion warm the wine of sensual grapes upon the vine of our lust. As lips touch and taste. As hearts entwine in beat and sighs become moans on the stillness of a finely crusted snow covered blanket.... Till..... Spring rains run us inside to the dance of candle flames and fiery coals.... When the SnowMaiden Smiles.... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I like this. It brought a smile to my face.  Cold hands means a warm heart |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
When the SnowMaiden Smiles.... ============================================= I love that last line. This is quite an endearing piece. ~Krissie "No one has ever loved ~anyone~ the way ~everyone~ wants to be loved" |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Ahhhhhh so very romantic! *sighs* sounds a lot better than my day on H-5... Gridlock...still having it's affect..LOL You are an amazing writer with such versatile talent. enjoyed, my friend,hugs, Cher Poetry is: |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Loner...pleased you're pleased... Krissie, you are most welcome and pleased to meet you...Stay around a while...enjoy.. Cher....YEP, I rememer H-5 totally.....Gads, why should any one on a beautiful island paradise have to be stuck in traffic like in NYC or some other yucky traffic place.... Thanx.... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Such encouragement of the snowflake and the sweet romantic prose. ThisDiamond |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Till..... Spring rains run us inside to the dance of candle flames and fiery coals.... When the SnowMaiden Smiles.... -------------------------------------------- Ah Barry...this reminds me, soon it will be time.. to make snow angels... Love this...so romantic. ~Sighs & Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Magnus, another great poem from such a talented poet. I love your work so much. All your work really touches my heart. I hope whoever it is that inspires you keeps on giving you the inspiration to pour your heart out this way. Best Wishes, Ethel...Garys Lady...garysgirl |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Stand, shiver not as we embrace and the fires of passion warm the wine of sensual grapes upon the vine of our lust. Oooh, dearest Magnus!! I love this very romantic read. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Beautiful! Overflowing with vivid imagery! Thanks for sharing! |
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