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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-10-07 08:06 PM




Picture by Josephine Wall


Time passes by so slowly
Through times of grief and sorrow
When days are filled with darkness
And you're unable to face tomorrow

Time can be a great reminder
When you've lost the one you love
As you recollect the old times
They view your life from up above

Time can often be a healer
As it mends a broken heart
But time can be an eternity
For two lovers far apart

Time has flown since I first met you
But how I treasure every day
This love we share is timeless
How you take my breath away

Time will wait for no-one
As the clock ticks by so fast
But one thing I know for certain
Through time our love will last

I'll love you for all eternity
As our two hearts join as one
You are my reason for living
My earth, my moon, my sun

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2002-10-07 08:17 PM


Time will wait for no-one
As the clock ticks by so fast
But one thing I know for certain
Through time our love will last

I'll love you for all eternity
As our two hearts join as one
You are my reason for living
My earth, my moon, my sun
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Sue...this is SO beautiful!!
And how true...time waits for no one.
Love the pic.
I must look up this artists website.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

AniKay83
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2 posted 2002-10-07 08:32 PM


I'll love you for all eternity
As our two hearts join as one
You are my reason for living
My earth, my moon, my sun
=============================================
I'm very fond of that last line. Excellent ending, great piece all together.
~Krissie

"No one has ever loved ~anyone~ the way ~everyone~ wants to be loved"
~Mignon McLaughlin~

the_loner_23
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
3 posted 2002-10-07 08:34 PM


Beautifully written

Cold hands means a warm heart

NewEnglandlazurlu
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4 posted 2002-10-07 08:37 PM


Sue, this is just beautiful in picture, words and the depth of meaning.

And because time waits for no one, we must cherish every moment of every day.

Hugs my friend, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

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5 posted 2002-10-07 10:58 PM


Sue:  A lovely poem and I'm sure you appreciate the value of time.

Betty Lou Hebert

garysgirl
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6 posted 2002-10-07 11:12 PM


Sue, this is so beautiful. Of course, it reminds me of me and my Gary. Especially this part...
"I'll love you for all eternity
As our two hearts join as one
You are my reason for living
My earth, my moon, my sun"

Thanks so much for sharing this lovely poem.
Love To All,
Ethel....garysgirl

regards2you
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7 posted 2002-10-07 11:53 PM


Very beautiful. Enjoyed it a lot.

Pat

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2002-10-08 04:46 AM


Very nice...James
CSKpoet
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9 posted 2002-10-08 05:52 AM


very nice..enjoyed
Cher

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Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

secretlife
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10 posted 2002-10-08 06:37 AM


What agreat words. As always your poems is very nice..

Hugesss


Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)


Elizabeth Santos
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11 posted 2002-10-08 07:29 AM


This is so true, time keeps moving even when you'd like it to pause a little bit
Enjoyed this very much
Liz

Goodknight
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12 posted 2002-10-08 10:04 AM


time and love - endless and yet finite - you write of them well Sue - Paul
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13 posted 2002-10-09 08:40 PM


"I'll love you for all eternity
As our two hearts join as one
You are my reason for living
My earth, my moon, my sun"




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, and may he always fill your heart with the warmth of the sun and the glow of nthe moon! (kiss on cheek) Yay, I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Kethry
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Victoria Australia
14 posted 2002-10-10 04:39 PM


Sue,
your words reach out to me even across the sea.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Munda
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The Hague, The Netherlands
15 posted 2002-10-10 04:57 PM


Ahhh, time is all that and so much more. Beautiful love poem.
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