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brian sites
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0 posted 2002-10-07 12:54 PM


                      the
                     divine

          reflected          seen
              in            through

                    
                    smelled

        with                       blush
           a                     angels
             smile that makes


[This message has been edited by brian sites (10-07-2002 02:38 PM).]

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WhiteRose
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1 posted 2002-10-07 12:57 PM


W
O
  N
   D
    E
     R
      F
       U
        L
          

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (10-07-2002 12:58 PM).]

brian sites
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2 posted 2002-10-07 01:03 PM


thank you Anne
Interloper
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2002-10-07 01:06 PM


Makes the .... what?  oh, now I see.  goitta read backward.

OK!

Interesting piece


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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WhiteRose
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4 posted 2002-10-07 01:08 PM


Angels blush. I see you got it.

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5 posted 2002-10-07 01:19 PM


The poor right side of her face!

I love the chances you take brian.
What i like more? You succeed!

Damn....

brian sites
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6 posted 2002-10-07 01:23 PM


interloper -- thank you!
Anne -- thanks again *hug*
Mike--- yeah...that......shrug?

garysgirl
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7 posted 2002-10-07 01:37 PM


B                                        THIS
  R                                  IS
     I                           SO
       A                     VERY
          N.....       VERY

                GOOD !!!


hey...that was kinda fun!!!HEEHEE  
I really do like your work. Thanks for sharing.

Love to all...
Ethel

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8 posted 2002-10-07 02:34 PM





            i        am


                you


          you         love
            are      my
              sunlight

brian sites
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9 posted 2002-10-07 02:40 PM


there! that
looks a little better

Garysgirl -- thank you very much

and YOU......
mmmmmmmmmmmmm
b

bsquirrel
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10 posted 2002-10-07 02:54 PM


we
  connect
   (triapse)
     through angles of sunlight,

a smile
unfinished.

Thanks guys!

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