Open Poetry #22 |
What is the Meaning |
regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Let's play out the pattern, one more time, and see the terror of our youth. For we have snagged each others torture, with the only love we ever knew. Let's play out the pattern, one more time, and we'll be the naughty children, just begging to receive reprisals, of the only love we ever knew. Though it's blocked before, our minds somehow, we're reflecting back the kind of care, that raped our innocent, infant souls, with the only love we ever knew. I wonder, will we ever conquer that fear instilled so young? And learn the mysteries of our worth, In spite of the unknowns. For, when our sense of right does surface, I do not suppress my rage, and you do show your anger, using humiliation and disgrace. While archaic influences control us still, and push us one more time toward constant self-destruction with the only love we ever knew. The pattern is stamped so clearly across our lives, in pain. We don't need to play the game again, it's like a history page. With conscious thought and insight, let's set aside these chapters, With tears, we'll close that book forever. And start a pattern of our own. We'll finally acknowledge, natural traits, we've admired in one another, and, accept our own true worthiness and, the things we were afraid to trust. With mutual honor and respect we'll hold our heads up high and teach the others lost in grief the meaning of true love! without surrender, be on good terms with all persons... |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I am deeply moved by your poem. A very powerful write! |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Thank you, Munda, I appreciate your comments. Pat without surrender, be on good terms with all persons... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Pat, do you realize what a great poet you are? I love your writings. You pour out onto paper the feelings in your heart so well. I find myself looking for your poems. Thanks for sharing with us. Best Wishes with your "TRUE LOVE", too. Love to all, Ethel...Garys Lady..garysgirl |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Well said...James |
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