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Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2002-10-06 09:25 PM

He was the Sun
A warm kiss on my face~
How he loved me for it once

Now, he shares the sky
with lady shadow
& apologizes for setting
with a magnificent bow
on her behalf

He touches, "adieu"
against my lips
before heralding a new
day on another's horizon

I wanted him to be my sun,
But in truth, he always shined
for them all...

~Tier
10/02

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-10-06 09:31 PM

Somehow, I figure there's
more behind this
then I might ever know...

but you got it out
and that is important...

and makes for a good, pondering read...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-10-06 09:31 PM

Tier~This is so hauntingly beautiful.
Very nicely penned...and much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

3 posted 2002-10-06 09:45 PM

A really beautiful write Tier,

This, does it for me

"He touches, "adieu"
against my lips
before heralding a new
day on another's horizon"

yep

~Ed

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

4 posted 2002-10-07 10:08 AM

To love a sun that shines for all, when you would rather it shine for you alone. Sometimes, we must share, and keep the special sunbeams for ourselves.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-10-07 10:48 AM

Tier, this is so beautiful. I like the way it makes me wonder what inspired you to write it. Maybe one of a poet's little secrets they never completely reveal? Very good. Thanks for sharing.

With Love and Best Wishes,
Ethel

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

6 posted 2002-10-07 11:04 AM

Big smile. Poetry doesn't get better than this. How creative. It's wonderful!

Pat

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

7 posted 2002-10-07 01:11 PM

'Tis better to have been warmed that to have never felt warmth

I love this piece!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

8 posted 2002-10-07 01:18 PM

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Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

9 posted 2002-10-07 01:23 PM

Thanks everyone for your kind replies. This was an old poem from 1998. I thought it could use a few changes and this was the result.

*smiles*
~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

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