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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-09-27 01:57 PM

Tailor Made

I wanted to feel
his silky words
upon my skin
the thickness
of threads
woven so thin
and unravel
the natural fibers
of his heart
hold close
just one string
just to start
to alter
me in
a tailor made way
printed in
a design
that could stay
so much fabric
in the texture
of his words
that they
covered me
and I heard

I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you.

Miah
Senior Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 1062
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2002-09-27 02:16 PM

Very enjoyable read.

The Crimson Knight
Member

since 2002-09-16

Posts 57
Reno, NV

2 posted 2002-09-27 02:27 PM

Enjoyed this,
Makes me want to be your coat or fine silk dress, but I’m more of the black leather jacket sort.
You tailor words well

DonFurr
Member

since 2001-01-01

Posts 172
Monticello IN

3 posted 2002-10-05 07:10 PM

How could one man say
all that you need to hear
Unless you heard it when he whispers
"I Love You Dear"

"If there is any doubt about it there is no doubt about it." Linnie Stanton

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

4 posted 2002-10-06 08:38 PM

Sheer awaiting a rustle. Enjoyed.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-10-07 01:05 AM

Hi, I like your poem and the way you compare. You clothed with words. Thanks for sharing.
Best Wishes,
Ethel....garysgirl

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

6 posted 2002-10-07 10:26 AM

Helen love the write hope I get a tailor soon tore my uniform pants bending over talk about a moment in life where you want to be invisible.
LOL
Thomas

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2002-10-07 10:34 AM

1slick_lady
A very good write, enjoyed the read.

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

8 posted 2002-10-07 11:20 AM

So creative. I loved it! Thank you.

Pat

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

9 posted 2002-10-07 01:08 PM

WOW!
This is 1derful!
WOW!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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