Open Poetry #22 |
an abstraction of inner thoughts |
GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
The words fell to dust. I itch to wish desperate moments away. In dreams my touch renders everything strong, absolute, unlike this weary existence that falls, softly. My attention seems to be revolving around belligerent abhorrence. I can’t understand it. Maybe I chose this pathetic rendition of a muse distraught. The trials of woe have caught my tears and bonded earthly visions into streaming soliloquies. I can’t name the horror which roughen hues upon a door. A glowing rubric emblazes an elaborate fallacy, mingling the irony of presumption and time revealing. s l i p p i n g Numb deliriums adorn chapels draped with the ghosts of hollow trees. Iridescent shadows strain to chase and delight in the memories of sight. Nothing can replace this. No time will do justice to the glory Of grace dispersed. This poem can’t explain the Emptiness, For wind blows enigmatical in all manners unknown. Poems can’t justify the sorrows of wind Blowing through caverns Gone tomorrow, hollow. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
they may not justify them, but they may certainly soothe them, providing a balm. They may help make some kind of sense of them ironing out misunderstandings, bringing clarity to cause and victory to combatting them. Quite a poem...these feelings have been displayed well within your weavings. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
I do agree with you, of course; i think writing is among the grandest mediums to express and give merit to feelings. Sometimes though... it's overwhelming. Thank You ! O' to be delivered from the realm of the rational into pure song... |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
a delicious abstraction this was, my friend. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
me too |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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