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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2002-10-04 03:29 PM

Gentle stir of breeze
softly blowing through the trees.
Peaceful is the song.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (10-04-2002 03:32 PM).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-10-04 03:34 PM

Gentle Spirit floats
ethereal and charming
widening ripples

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2002-10-04 03:40 PM

Sunshine spreading light
fills us with delight.
Warming sensations.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

caterina
Member

since 2002-07-25

Posts 188
Canada

3 posted 2002-10-04 03:51 PM

You certainly captured a moment there, very well done. It's a moment that everyone feels, I think, and this haiku is a lovely reminder of that.

Thankyou

caterina

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

4 posted 2002-10-04 03:52 PM

how beautiful done....truly a haiky gem to me. Thanks for sharing

Charisma

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

5 posted 2002-10-04 04:06 PM

This is pretty

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-10-04 04:12 PM

Invisible wind
I know where you are, when the
Soft willows curtsey.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-10-04 04:29 PM

Spirits in the wind
Throw cotton zephyr parades
Autumn graffiti

(smiles) I just love this, sweet friend, your beautiful words always reflect natures purity so well, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!