navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #22 » The Fundamental Element
Open Poetry #22
Post A Reply Post New Topic The Fundamental Element Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
regards2you
Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
California

0 posted 2002-10-04 11:33 AM





     There is a place
       just beyond
   the limits of physics,
       one degree above
       the here and now.
     Anyone can get there
           faster than
      the speed of light.
          It's a place
        where I can go.
      Where the 'I' of me can
              be.
        It's a connection
          scientists
         have longed for.
      A puzzle piece diminishing
       before they can apply
         their telescopes,
          microscopes, or
       mathematical formulas.
            Quick or slow,
          as the case may be,
      they'll not find the chain,
        nor, discover the link
          with minds alone.
        For, what's required,
                is a

        measurement of soul.


without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

© Copyright 2002 Patricia L.Thompson - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
1 posted 2002-10-04 11:45 AM




(sigh) Oh Patricia, such wisdom and truth fills your words, sweet friend, science may have some value definitely but the real answers to how we hold ourselves true in this world rely on the heart and spirit! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Patricia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

WhiteRose
Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
2 posted 2002-10-04 11:45 AM


Wow! This was great. Enjoyed!
Toerag
Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
3 posted 2002-10-04 11:54 AM


Great write...have ya heard of the newest
element?

It's been brought to my attention
That there's another element addition,
"Woman" being the element name,
Atomic weight we will not mention

This element has a curvy form
And boils at seemingly nothing
It may freeze with little warning
Or melt when given something.

It's bitter if not used well
It's very active and unstable
Has strong affinity to gold and silver
Absorbs chocolate when available

It also has a tendency
To turn a pale green when,
Placed beside another
More attractive specimen

It's highly ornamental
A catalyst for dispersion of
Wealth and income properties,
And is explosive once a month.

regards2you
Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
California
4 posted 2002-10-04 11:55 AM


To Mistletoe and WhiteRose
I had such fun writing this. It is a joy to share it with others. So glad you like it.

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

regards2you
Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
California
5 posted 2002-10-04 12:01 PM


Toerag: Hahahahahahahahahahahaha
Oh, that is so good! THANKS!

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

suthern
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Seraphic
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
6 posted 2002-10-04 04:23 PM


I enjoyed this very much... Toe's response, too. *S*
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
7 posted 2002-10-04 07:55 PM


I love the theme of this...
Exactly right. Thank you.
ThisDiamond

Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
8 posted 2002-10-04 10:19 PM


What a cool write! I enjoyed this very much, it took this mind on a short trip to another realm.
regards2you
Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
California
9 posted 2002-10-04 10:48 PM


To Suthern - glad you did enjoy it. Everytime I read Toe's I burst out
laughing. What talent!

To ThisDiamond - the theme happened because of a scientist I know who's whole goal in life is to learn to create "the energy in a cell." Kinda started there but grew more into meditation theme...Glad you liked it

To Midnitesun: a little astral projecting? glad you are back. Thanks

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
10 posted 2004-05-06 12:52 PM


indeed
Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
11 posted 2004-05-06 03:49 PM


MyFriendMyFriend~
Do you have any idea how much I LOVE IT when DixieDoodle unearths one of these archived beauties of yours ?

You are missed at these boards poetess,
by many who know your talent far exceeds the 'self-acclaimed' writers of mere words~

Follow your star ... for it is leading you to far greater astral projections~

Hey ... and you know what?
I love you gal~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #22 » The Fundamental Element

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary