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deep sleep syndrome |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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in the arms of the night breathes the suspense child of dawn in its prodigious patience waiting with closed eyes as if in a nymph-filled reverie where do we go from here? is tomorrow going to be much different than yesterday? will it rain on me tomorrow while I rush from my door to the nearest train-station like one amongst the herd a shadow amongst the hordes a dark soul amongst the ghosts? and my taxing brain gropes for some light in the dark as the big search continues as the child becomes a man while tomorrow dawns like a bowl full of wisdom cookies only one of which can be had at a given time |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sudhir, are you trying to tell me to keep my fingers out of the wisdom-cookie jar? And that I can't have more than one? Fudge.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, More then one would give you a belly ache, well done enjoyed the read. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
ha ha ha ha ... slow and steady wins the "turtle" race... thanks to you both Karilea and Seymour for coming by.... regards, sudhir |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ 'in the arms of the night breathes the suspense child of dawn in its prodigious patience waiting with closed eyes as if in a nymph-filled reverie' Do you have any idea just how GOOD this is ? You are remarkably talented my friend~ I like it very much~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"waiting with closed eyes as if in a nymph-filled reverie" Oh, I do relate to this line. That is how I've felt for quite some time now, waiting to revisit these blue pages, and to read such words of grace and wisdom again. Thank you, friend. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
What a pleasure it is to read your work, you are so very gifted in your presentation of images and thoughts. Thank you for sharing this beauty. I pass this way but once, here's hoping I meet you. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Oh My friends, Many thanks from all my heart... Regards to each of you, Sudhir |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good stuff to ponder...back to the top you go, my friend!  |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
thank you so much, my friend... Regards, sudhir |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sudhir- This is incredible writing! I very much enjoyed reading it. You are truly talented, my friend.  Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you so much, Vicky for coming by and appeciating my words... You are incredible, my friend... Regards, Sudhir |
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