Open Poetry #22 |
OH , PILLAR OF STRENGTH.......(Haiku) |
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, pillar of strength, With arms out-stretched and your trunk So deeply rooted. [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-02-2002 12:56 PM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh yea, that's all it takes. Nice haiku you! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
BluesSerenade---Thank you! I love writing Haikus and Tankas. So much can be conveyed with so few words. Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Does anyone know of a way to change a title (topic) if you make a typo like I did? Linda |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
EA, please check your E-mail! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Powerful piece!Excellent twist at the end that was really the goal of the piece all along. Masterful! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sunshine.... I just received your email. Thank you! I've made the change to my title. I feel like a bit of a numbskull! I know how to edit, Lord knows I've done it enough! I think I was over-tired and didn't think of looking up----way up---to see that I could make a change above the edit area for the body of the poem. Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-02-2002 01:30 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sunshine----Yes, I have ventured forth and posted poems to both the Spiritual and Dark poetry forums. The spiritual poems come very easily to me, but the dark ones are a bit more difficult---more of a stretch. I think everyone should be able to express the shadow side of themselves. Keeping in balance---it's a yin yang thing! As they say, there are two sides to every coin! Thanks again! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Attention everybody! This is not an x-rated haiku! It's about a tree, not a man! Ha! Ha! Ha! Earthy Angel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(giggles in delight) Well the first second I read this I knew it was a tree! ROTFL!!! This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
This Haiku is as strong as an oak. And is deeply rooted in meaning. Nice one!!! It reminds me of a lot of people in my life. Thanks for the memories!! |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
I love this! Haiku's are so awesome if well written and this one was. Hugs, Marti "Even if life is full of thorns, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah---Excuse my ignorance, but since I'm a new kid on the block here at PIP, I don't know what ROTFL means. In fact I have received a others like that and I haven't a clue what they mean either. Could you help me out with this? Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Krishankins---Clever reply! Glad that you appreciated the message! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Marti---thank you for the very nice compliment! Linda |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Good one, enjoyed. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sy---Thank you! I enjoyed your comment! Linda |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
few words and a deeply rooted meaning |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ecrivan---few words and a deeply rooted reply! Linda |
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