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Open Poetry #22

Taste of a Dream

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

0 posted 2002-10-04 08:14 AM

TASTE OF A DREAM

a moon
sifted powdered sugar
into black rain

and a hot, sweet,
wind-stirred syrup
began
slow sliding from
sultry night sky
onto me,
onto you

it was
a dream taste,
a delicacy boiled
in midnight storm

make it come true

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

1 posted 2002-10-04 08:34 AM

Sweet dreams!

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2002-10-04 09:33 AM

This has such a lovely, tender feel to it. Well done!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2002-10-04 10:07 AM

Now that is a sweet dream!---literally!

Lovely poem! Enjoyed it!

~ May all your dreams be sweet! ~

Earth Angel

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

4 posted 2002-10-04 01:53 PM

and a hot, sweet,
wind-stirred syrup
began
slow sliding from
sultry night sky
onto me,
onto you

rich beautiful images. wonderful poem.

El riesgo vive siempre!

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