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Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

0 posted 2002-09-30 04:01 PM

In rays of love, my Moon, let me delight.
With stars and sun, my Love, oh let me play.
And let me be your own this Passions’ night.

Please let your face, my Love, be my first sight;
The face that wakes me now at dusk of day.
In rays of love, my Moon, let me delight.

Now let my heart, my Moon, with yours take flight.
Guide it, love, to the place where your heart stays
And let me be your own this Passions’ night.

Your touch, my Moon, will let these flames ignite
And show to me the secrets of the way.
In rays of love, my Moon, let me delight.

With words of love, my Moon, let me excite.
O may they make your heart beat fast, I pray;
And let me be your own this Passions’ night.

I will always, Moon, your name recite.
Forever will my heart be in your rays.
In rays of love, my Moon, let me delight.
And let me be your own this Passions’ night.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-09-30 04:09 PM

(sigh) This is soooooo sensually beautiful, sweet friend, this is a breathtaking villanelle that reflects the beauty and magic of the moon in its entirety, may true love forever consume your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Romeo, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2002-09-30 04:12 PM

A lovely piece of reflective magic. ThisDiamond

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-09-30 04:23 PM

Absolutely beautiful!
Enjoyed the read.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

4 posted 2002-10-02 09:07 AM

Thank you very much for reading.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Siofra

Senior Member

since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

5 posted 2002-10-03 01:03 AM

You thought I'd forgotten you didn't you, Darling?

What do you know..this is about my favorite subject! Beautiful, m'love

"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

6 posted 2002-10-03 01:37 PM

I knew that you did not forget, my Love. As I could never forget you, my favorite subject.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2002-10-04 03:04 PM

The tenderness in your heart shines through in this beautiful poem. I loved reading it. Thanks for sharing. Ethel

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2002-10-04 03:07 PM

Lovely poem...
Maureen

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