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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2002-10-04 07:43 AM


Would You

Would you take my hand a day of play?
Be a butterfly and fly away.
Could you drop the binds of your mind?
And dream with me a harbor find?

Could you balance a carpets fly
Into the blue and clouded sky
Into the wondrous hues of dream
Into the make believe of seem?

For sure it takes a little wile
One with guile to set the style
Adornment of a common wish
With the implement of a swish

Swish, you swish a wish come true
And there you are it’s all for you.
Give yourself the day and play
And have the whole of night to stay.

It is a gift from you to you
For you it is a coup to do.



© Copyright 2002 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2002-10-04 08:36 AM


"For you it is a coup to do."



Por Moi?

no, no, mon cherie...





I am CO---MAN---CHEEEEEEEEE!!!!!

*ahem*

too much coffee already?

If I told ya once, I'll tell ya thousands, I like it insider yer head, sy!

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2002-10-04 08:55 AM


Mr. T., I'm reaching across the miles to hold hands with you.

Let's you and I fly away for day of play!

This poem, and your attitude towards life, appeals to the Peter Pan in me.

I really like this poem---as well as the man who wrote it!

~ May we be forever young! ~

EA

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3 posted 2002-10-04 09:15 AM



Will I then never a day to rue
if I blend your roux a stew
to sip upon and make some warm
if I take your hand and arm?

Nan
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4 posted 2002-10-04 09:25 AM


That does it - I'm calling in 'playing today' - Where's the party?...
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5 posted 2002-10-04 09:27 AM


Sy, I would take your hand and fly away for a day of play anytime!!
Beautiful way to start my day love!
~Morning hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2002-10-04 09:30 AM


As always, an uplifting and lovely impression of romantic play. ThisDiamond
VAS
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7 posted 2002-10-04 09:38 AM


this wraps the tongue around the mine in delightful play with words and sounds...the texture of the rhythm is delightful, too!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

NewEnglandlazurlu
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8 posted 2002-10-04 09:39 AM


Sy, I'm ready to take your hand and fly. This is going to be such a fun day and here I thought I was going to be doing laundry and vacuuming.

Playing with you will be so much more fun. Love how lighthearted you are and how you bring that to me!

Hugs and enjoy your day.  Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

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9 posted 2002-10-04 09:45 AM




(smiles) Your wonderful words always lend us a hand and take us to the neverland in our hearts, sweet friend, you can always take my hand of friendship too, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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10 posted 2002-10-04 10:00 AM


Seymour - Wait for me.....wait for me!!! Oh, it would be wonderful....just as is this poem. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2002-10-04 10:23 AM


Serenity,
And I like you as a whole package. LOL


Earth Angel,
To me you will be forever young.

Sunshine,
You have my hand arm and heart.

Nan,
Then I'll make you queen of the may.

Enchantress,
Hugs back to you my love with a

This Diamond,
Thank you my dear.

VAS,
Thank you sweet.

Marti,
Just whistle while you work, LOL it helps me.

Noah,
It is a day of mental play, but still fun.

Chris,
I would never leave you my dear, climb aboard

regards2you
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12 posted 2002-10-04 11:00 AM


Would I?  Yes, yes, yes, just as soon as I peel myself off the ceiling!
This is better than a Calgon bath.
Whoa, what an invitation.Am levitating
as I write. Can't wait to begin. Thanks! I needed this  

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2002-10-04 11:04 AM


regards2you
And the dust glitters like gold. Thank you my dear we will fly.

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14 posted 2002-10-04 11:25 AM


Give yourself the day and play
And have the whole of night to stay

...I wish.

Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2002-10-04 11:50 AM


Hey Dunc,
You can learn to control your dreams. Thanks for the read.

Toerag
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16 posted 2002-10-04 12:05 PM


I think I'm played out my friend..so play for me will ya?...Good write Sy
WhiteRose
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17 posted 2002-10-04 12:07 PM


This was a lovely write Sy, that appeals to the child in all of us.
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18 posted 2002-10-04 12:17 PM


"Could you balance a carpets fly
Into the blue and clouded sky
Into the wondrous hues of dream
Into the make believe of seem?"

I do love the way you write
the flow here is fantastic and reads aloud perfectly

Janet Marie
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19 posted 2002-10-04 02:54 PM


Would you take my hand a day of play?
Be a butterfly and fly away.
Could you drop the binds of your mind?
And dream with me a harbor find?

Could you balance a carpets fly
Into the blue and clouded sky
Into the wondrous hues of dream
Into the make believe of seem?

===========================================




Tinkerbell reporting for take off  


you already know I'd fly with you anywhere, anytime, anyday....
Rev up Randy's engines and lets hit the sky.


Could you drop the binds of your mind?
And dream with me a harbor find?



youre so cool...even your rhymes fly high.


*winkiewinkie*

  

[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (10-04-2002 02:55 PM).]

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20 posted 2002-10-04 03:22 PM


Sy, do you have a brother?

well I  just thought I would ask

always enjoy your skill at rhyming
hugs
M

Charisma
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21 posted 2002-10-04 04:13 PM


oh my am I too late, would love to take your hand and fly with you....love it

Charisma

Seymour Tabin
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22 posted 2002-10-04 04:33 PM


Toe,
I don't believe that. Just open Pandora's box
LOL

White Rose,
You can bring the child with you. LOL

Sea,
And your reply reads even smoother. LOL

Dear Tink,
Randy says he'll take you anywhere anytime and so will I.
WWRS

Maureen,
I do but he is five years older then I. LOL

Seymour Tabin
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23 posted 2002-10-04 04:36 PM


Charisma
Just join the conga line, one two three hip.
Thank you.

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24 posted 2002-10-04 04:40 PM


It sure sounds better than staying here stuck in reality. *S* I like this very much, Seymour. *S*
Seymour Tabin
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25 posted 2002-10-04 04:45 PM


Suthern,
Well reality has its place. LOL

garysgirl
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26 posted 2002-10-04 08:46 PM


Seymour, I simply  LOVE  your "play" with your words. They make a person want to go play. With Love From Ethel......garysgirl
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27 posted 2002-10-04 09:00 PM


All the girls are set to play
Now let me make a guess
The games that they are thinking of
Are not Parcheesi or Chess!!!

Seymour Tabin
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28 posted 2002-10-04 09:20 PM


garysgirl
Thank you dear so nice of you to reply.

Balladeer,
I knew you would let the cat out of the bag.

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29 posted 2002-10-07 02:14 PM


wonderful work......ah.....to dream......ah...to play....
sigh...I must be working too hard....this sure does sound good......

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