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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Would You Would you take my hand a day of play? Be a butterfly and fly away. Could you drop the binds of your mind? And dream with me a harbor find? Could you balance a carpets fly Into the blue and clouded sky Into the wondrous hues of dream Into the make believe of seem? For sure it takes a little wile One with guile to set the style Adornment of a common wish With the implement of a swish Swish, you swish a wish come true And there you are it’s all for you. Give yourself the day and play And have the whole of night to stay. It is a gift from you to you For you it is a coup to do. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"For you it is a coup to do."  Por Moi? no, no, mon cherie...   I am CO---MAN---CHEEEEEEEEE!!!!! *ahem* too much coffee already? If I told ya once, I'll tell ya thousands, I like it insider yer head, sy! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T., I'm reaching across the miles to hold hands with you. Let's you and I fly away for day of play! This poem, and your attitude towards life, appeals to the Peter Pan in me. I really like this poem---as well as the man who wrote it! ~ May we be forever young! ~ EA |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Will I then never a day to rue if I blend your roux a stew to sip upon and make some warm if I take your hand and arm? |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
That does it - I'm calling in 'playing today' - Where's the party?...  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sy, I would take your hand and fly away for a day of play anytime!! Beautiful way to start my day love! ~Morning hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
As always, an uplifting and lovely impression of romantic play. ThisDiamond |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
this wraps the tongue around the mine in delightful play with words and sounds...the texture of the rhythm is delightful, too! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sy, I'm ready to take your hand and fly. This is going to be such a fun day and here I thought I was going to be doing laundry and vacuuming. Playing with you will be so much more fun. Love how lighthearted you are and how you bring that to me! Hugs and enjoy your day. Marti Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Your wonderful words always lend us a hand and take us to the neverland in our hearts, sweet friend, you can always take my hand of friendship too, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour - Wait for me.....wait for me!!! Oh, it would be wonderful....just as is this poem. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, And I like you as a whole package. LOL Earth Angel, To me you will be forever young. Sunshine, You have my hand arm and heart.  Nan, Then I'll make you queen of the may. Enchantress, Hugs back to you my love with a This Diamond, Thank you my dear. VAS, Thank you sweet. Marti, Just whistle while you work, LOL it helps me. Noah, It is a day of mental play, but still fun. Chris, I would never leave you my dear, climb aboard |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Would I? Yes, yes, yes, just as soon as I peel myself off the ceiling! This is better than a Calgon bath. Whoa, what an invitation.Am levitating as I write. Can't wait to begin. Thanks! I needed this without surrender, be on good terms with all persons... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
regards2you And the dust glitters like gold. Thank you my dear we will fly. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Give yourself the day and play And have the whole of night to stay ...I wish. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hey Dunc, You can learn to control your dreams. Thanks for the read. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I think I'm played out my friend..so play for me will ya?...Good write Sy |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This was a lovely write Sy, that appeals to the child in all of us. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Could you balance a carpets fly Into the blue and clouded sky Into the wondrous hues of dream Into the make believe of seem?" I do love the way you write the flow here is fantastic and reads aloud perfectly |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Would you take my hand a day of play? Be a butterfly and fly away. Could you drop the binds of your mind? And dream with me a harbor find? Could you balance a carpets fly Into the blue and clouded sky Into the wondrous hues of dream Into the make believe of seem? ===========================================  Tinkerbell reporting for take off you already know I'd fly with you anywhere, anytime, anyday.... Rev up Randy's engines and lets hit the sky. Could you drop the binds of your mind? And dream with me a harbor find? youre so cool...even your rhymes fly high. *winkiewinkie* [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (10-04-2002 02:55 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sy, do you have a brother? well I just thought I would ask always enjoy your skill at rhyming hugs M |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh my am I too late, would love to take your hand and fly with you....love it Charisma |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Toe, I don't believe that. Just open Pandora's box LOL White Rose, You can bring the child with you. LOL Sea, And your reply reads even smoother. LOL Dear Tink, Randy says he'll take you anywhere anytime and so will I. WWRS Maureen, I do but he is five years older then I. LOL |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Charisma Just join the conga line, one two three hip. Thank you. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It sure sounds better than staying here stuck in reality. *S* I like this very much, Seymour. *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, Well reality has its place. LOL |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour, I simply LOVE your "play" with your words. They make a person want to go play. With Love From Ethel......garysgirl |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
All the girls are set to play Now let me make a guess The games that they are thinking of Are not Parcheesi or Chess!!!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
garysgirl Thank you dear so nice of you to reply. Balladeer, I knew you would let the cat out of the bag. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
wonderful work......ah.....to dream......ah...to play.... sigh...I must be working too hard....this sure does sound good...... |
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