Open Poetry #22 |
slow rain rust |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I felt like Mia Farrow reading your replies-- little bird-- hop and chirp-- dancing in the glass of field reflecting two-winged span of lies... I felt it. It felt really real... dry my tears too late for dust I am just a slow rain's rust-- "petitioning the gods that be..." Iamyou/youareme. Everything you're not is me... Casting shadows darkness lies: "petitioning the gods that sigh..." |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
look again at the reflection in that glass wren |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Damn, I was wondering how I got so pretty! Um ... that made less than no sense. A heady, (drunken?) slow sip; small, scorching read. Your answers leave more questions. Fly. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
"petitioning the gods that be..." Iamyou/youareme. Everything you're not is me... Casting shadows darkness lies: "petitioning the gods that sigh..." WOW, taht is the only reply I can muster at the moment. The line, "petitioning the gods that sigh..." is classic. El riesgo vive siempre! |
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