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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738


0 posted 2002-10-04 03:32 AM


I felt like Mia Farrow
reading your replies--
little bird--
hop and chirp--
dancing in the glass of field

reflecting

two-winged span of lies...
I felt it.
It felt really real...

dry
my tears
too late for dust
I
am just
a slow rain's rust--


"petitioning
the gods that be..."

Iamyou/youareme.

Everything
you're not
is me...

Casting shadows
darkness lies:

"petitioning
the gods that sigh..."

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brian sites
Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475
usa
1 posted 2002-10-04 04:19 AM


look again at the reflection
in that glass
wren

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2002-10-04 04:37 AM


Enjoyed...James
bsquirrel
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

3 posted 2002-10-04 12:35 PM


Damn,
I was wondering how I got so pretty!

Um ... that made less than no sense.

A heady, (drunken?) slow sip; small,
scorching
read.

Your answers leave more questions.
Fly.

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
4 posted 2002-10-04 01:49 PM


"petitioning
the gods that be..."

Iamyou/youareme.

Everything
you're not
is me...

Casting shadows
darkness lies:

"petitioning
the gods that sigh..."


WOW, taht is the only reply I can muster at the moment.

The line, "petitioning
the gods that sigh..."
is classic.

El riesgo vive siempre!

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