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Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2002-10-04 12:49 PM


My mind is lost
my heart is breaking
life is melting away like icicles in the sping
drifting away from you

I am muddled
Don't care
Don't realize
My life is full ahead
but I am stuck right here
Lost in an image
Lost in a dream
trance like opinion

Heart unfree
fairness and like-ability
greetings and unloyalty
broken hearted
empty hearted
brainless craziness

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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
1 posted 2002-10-04 01:53 AM


this makes me think of the main character in a book I just finished...Echoes by Robin Jones Gunn

I'm sorry that life is handing you such pain and chaos. May it be a lesson that is a huge blessing in disguise, yet recognized sooner than later.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2002-10-05 11:58 AM


Lost in a dream
trance like opinion


It's easy to get caught up in the back draft of our own thoughts.
I hope today is a better day.

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