Open Poetry #22 |
Dreamy Guitar Blues |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“DREAMY GUITAR BLUES”’ by Bill Charles ~~~~ My thoughts aren’t mine tonight, as these soft chords sing out… I’m in a world somewhere else, of this there isn’t any doubt… These fingers must be magic, to play this rhythm tonight… They move all over the frets, shadows in the pale moonlight… I haven’t seen your eyes before, or hips you sway in front of me… It has to be the magic of it all, perhaps this enchanting melody… When I look at you single dancing, you are most inspiring to my muse… Then I strum softer only for you, and play this dreamy guitar blues… ~~~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo passionately beautiful, sweet friend, and may she invite youn to take this dance and may the blues come alive with a twist of rhythm, I love it, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Miss T. Eyed Junior Member
since 2002-05-26
Posts 47 |
Sounds great to me, I could hear the music as I read this poem. |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
I personally know the inspiration that Moonlight can bring. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill, Nice one, it played out real well. enjoyed |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I enjoyed your poem....I love the blues, I was pickin' on my Taylor this weekend, then my old Martin and just bought a Larrivee that I love to play....Do you indeed "pick" or do ya just use poetry for your music? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sounds dreamy. Nothing gets me feeling more romantic than when a man is serenading me. That warm fuzzy feeling makes me feel so tingly. ~ You keep strummin' and they'll keep comin'! ~ tehe EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Must be magic...in your music Bill. Very nice... ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Magic words, magic music.....magic poem....love it when you play this dreamy guitar blues Charisma |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Mr. Guitarman, Play it again. I like your blues. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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caterina Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 188Canada |
The title caught my attention because I love the guitar and piano....music is so powerful....just like poetry. You have a softness with your poems, very soothing and of course romantic. A lovely read Bill, thankyou. caterina |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, you not only "sing" your love....you "play" it, too!!!! Love to All, Ethel......garysgirl |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I've often been in "a world somewhere else" while playing my guitar. It's a "dreamy" world. Late at night, when my senses are dulled, I can be so caught up in my music, I can almost forget that I'm the one playing. Seriously, I just drift away on a sea of melody. ~ Keep playing and keep writing, those dreamy guitar blues! ~ EA |
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