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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-09-27 10:37 PM


“DREAMY GUITAR BLUES”’
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
My thoughts aren’t mine tonight,
as these soft chords sing out…
I’m in a world somewhere else,
of this there isn’t any doubt…

These fingers must be magic,
to play this rhythm tonight…
They move all over the frets,
shadows in the pale moonlight…

I haven’t seen your eyes before,
or hips you sway in front of me…
It has to be the magic of it all,
perhaps this enchanting melody…

When I look at you single dancing,
you are most inspiring to my muse…
Then I strum softer only for you,
and play this dreamy guitar blues…
~~~~

© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-09-27 10:42 PM






(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo passionately beautiful, sweet friend, and may she invite youn to take this dance and may the blues come alive with a twist of rhythm, I love it, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-09-30 10:04 AM


Sounds great to me, I could hear the music as I read this poem.
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3 posted 2002-09-30 10:14 AM


I personally know the inspiration that Moonlight can bring.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2002-09-30 10:35 AM


Bill,
Nice one, it played out real well. enjoyed

Toerag
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5 posted 2002-09-30 11:03 AM


I enjoyed your poem....I love the blues, I was pickin' on my Taylor this weekend, then my old Martin and just bought a Larrivee that I love to play....Do you indeed "pick" or do ya just use poetry for your music?
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6 posted 2002-09-30 11:23 AM


Sounds dreamy. Nothing gets me feeling more romantic than when a man is serenading me. That warm fuzzy feeling makes me feel so tingly.

~ You keep strummin' and they'll keep comin'! ~ tehe

EA

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7 posted 2002-09-30 12:14 PM


Must be magic...in your music Bill.
Very nice...  
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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8 posted 2002-10-05 09:41 AM


Magic words, magic music.....magic poem....love it when you play this dreamy guitar blues

Charisma

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9 posted 2002-10-05 10:22 AM


Mr. Guitarman,
Play it again. I like your blues.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

caterina
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10 posted 2002-10-05 10:35 AM



The title caught my attention because I love the guitar and piano....music is so powerful....just like poetry.  You have a softness with your poems, very soothing and of course romantic.

A lovely read Bill, thankyou.

caterina


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11 posted 2002-10-05 10:48 AM


Bill, you not only  "sing"  your love....you  "play"  it, too!!!!

Love to All,
Ethel......garysgirl

Earth Angel
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12 posted 2002-10-05 11:15 AM


I've often been in "a world somewhere else" while playing my guitar. It's a "dreamy" world.

Late at night, when my senses are dulled, I can be so caught up in my music, I can almost forget that I'm the one playing. Seriously, I just drift away on a sea of melody.

~ Keep playing and keep writing, those dreamy guitar blues! ~

EA

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