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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-10-03 10:54 PM


Lying beside you
softest breath caressing my face.
Such beauty....

You, all of you.....
Might this be all that I wish...
All that I feel...
Of you...

Sheets, crumpled...
A passionate duet....again...
Yet...as I lie beside you...
I ask with my eyes....
And you answer with yours...
Again!


© Copyright 2002 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-10-03 10:57 PM


Oh my!! What a lusty fellow you are Magnus! I'm surprised you had time to write this little tickler!! What else can I say? Keep "up" the good work...LOL..sorry for that, couldn't help myself!!
Tammy

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2 posted 2002-10-03 10:58 PM




(smiles) Sooooooo snesually beautiful, sweet friend, the eyes can always say so much and you express only some of the most beautiful things they can say here, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautifuln heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-10-03 11:03 PM


Your fingers trace me
as your eyes drink in my curves
...you ask without words

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2002-10-03 11:14 PM


Bravo!
ThisDiamond

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5 posted 2002-10-04 01:59 AM


I could have gone all night without reading this one, yet with the little time I have to afford to peek in, I go and choose this one.

You see, my memories that relate to the essence of this are 35 years old. This was written very well about going all night(hehehehe). There remains but a flicker of recollection.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2002-10-04 04:39 AM


Yes this sounds like an all night long...James
Toerag
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7 posted 2002-10-04 07:25 AM


Oh no! Not "again"..."again" you're here charming all these women with your romantic poetic thoughts...you should be ashamed of yourself..."again"....And you think us guys are going to read this "Again"?....okay...so we might...just cuz it's a good write.."again"...but then "again"...yours are usually good writes.....See ya "again" Maggie....
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8 posted 2002-10-04 07:51 AM


You touched Enchantress...an impromptu duet...i salute the power of your words  

...believe what your heart feels.....

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9 posted 2002-10-04 09:00 AM


"Again" ????

Regarding our duet together, I think you left out the best part!!!!!!!!! Oh my, did you ever! tehe

EA


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10 posted 2002-10-04 10:09 AM


Magnus - Whew...is it hot in here or is it just your words?!! Well done. Chris

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11 posted 2002-10-04 10:12 AM



Oh gads...
[write] Again,
please!

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