Open Poetry #22 |
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Again...... |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA ![]() |
Lying beside you softest breath caressing my face. Such beauty.... You, all of you..... Might this be all that I wish... All that I feel... Of you... Sheets, crumpled... A passionate duet....again... Yet...as I lie beside you... I ask with my eyes.... And you answer with yours... Again! |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
Oh my!! What a lusty fellow you are Magnus! I'm surprised you had time to write this little tickler!! What else can I say? Keep "up" the good work...LOL..sorry for that, couldn't help myself!! ![]() Tammy |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Sooooooo snesually beautiful, sweet friend, the eyes can always say so much and you express only some of the most beautiful things they can say here, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautifuln heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Your fingers trace me as your eyes drink in my curves ...you ask without words |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Bravo! ThisDiamond |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I could have gone all night without reading this one, yet with the little time I have to afford to peek in, I go and choose this one. You see, my memories that relate to the essence of this are 35 years old. This was written very well about going all night(hehehehe). There remains but a flicker of recollection. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes this sounds like an all night long...James |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Oh no! Not "again"..."again" you're here charming all these women with your romantic poetic thoughts...you should be ashamed of yourself..."again"....And you think us guys are going to read this "Again"?....okay...so we might...just cuz it's a good write.."again"...but then "again"...yours are usually good writes.....See ya "again" Maggie.... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
You touched Enchantress...an impromptu duet...i salute the power of your words ...believe what your heart feels..... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Again" ???? Regarding our duet together, I think you left out the best part!!!!!!!!! Oh my, did you ever! tehe EA |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Magnus - Whew...is it hot in here or is it just your words?!! Well done. Chris ![]() Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh gads... [write] Again, please! |
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