Open Poetry #22 |
Gathering |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“GATHERING” Sweep me into your gentle arms, as I have fallen from a branch to walk together, stroll on the path of forever, yet while we do I would hold you tight, touch you, and whisper words until it felt divine, like the breeze touching the leaves when they fell from the trees, and sang a song for you… ~~~~ by Bill Charles… |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) This is so beautifully touching, sweet friend, and may this love sweep you off your feet and caress your soul like a zephyr in the heart of a bird-hatching robin caroling spring! (big hugggsssss) You always gather such magic in your words, sweet friend, I love it my blues brother, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW Bill!!! Talk about a *SIGH* song! Oh myyyyy...wonderful! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
Bill you are a charmer!! I hope this lucky lady you have knows what a catch she got!! *sigh* I wonder if you could give my husband a few pointers?!! Keep up the great works. We love ya'! Tammy |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
OH BC....yet again...you write such passion with the flames flickering around the heels.. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
'stroll on the path of forever...' Ooooh my, ooooh my! You do write the most romantic words. Ahhhhhh, sighing with contentment!!! Hugs, Marti Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Bill - This is beautiful. Sighing...Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is peaceful and gentle, and I love it. Nan(Pilgrim variety) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The song that you have just sung, sings in my soul. EA |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
well...who is falling now? giggle |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh* oh Bill this is sooooo beautifully done, think I'm falling here..... (((hugs))) Charisma |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill This is beautiful and reads like a song...one of your best! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, I love the way you "sing" to your love. Really beautiful. Thanks for sharing. With Love, Ethel.....garysgirl |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
With an anxious romantic ear I listen to your romantic voice swept into the lull of a great love lullaby. jkf |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So your leaves sing, too? Good to know...! |
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